Thursday, December 26, 2013

SPASTIC LEGS

Such tremors can bring frightening conflicts, you certainly describe a terrible struggle either physical or spiritual (metaphorical) in either case both are painfully assaulting, till we learn to deal and accept such. My best to you always... enjoy the season with your family.- LightH2O

ON THE JAGGED STONES

Very deeply layered in textured. Powerful play with words.- just Arun

Monday, December 23, 2013

POINT OF VIEW

Nice poem
World has changed
Everything is masterly managed
No place for misery or pain
Self interest has only remained.-Hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

Thank you for sharing this. In a world of sin and crime, it is little wonder that tears turn into stones and a heart-breaking song becomes an irony.
It's perhaps better to look into the sky thank looking into the eyes.- Supratik Sen, Hyderbad

THE SWAN - SONG

wonderful as usual..Good imagination !! -VS, KL

GENESIS

Book of life with greasy stain.... Nice expression- seema chowdhury

Saturday, December 21, 2013

THE ENDING

A wonderfully deep pen, in such a short poem you put a lifetime food for thought! The wonders of the truth, the life and death, the looking forward unscared. I really loved this poem, thank you for share!- Elena S

A FRIGHTENING DREAM

the poor mostly cannot survive without Love of one another
so some know God long before the rich destroy this earth for 'profit', thus destroying their evil...- stranger

KILLING ZONE

I love this a lot, the different histories embedded, from different path. Lovely ponder-Entelechy 

Thursday, December 19, 2013

MOON RISE

A sensitive look at the ways fear can take us - - woven with care your word- reflections make an enlightening read. Thanks for sharing this depth of thought Satash.- Fay Slimm

RIPPED APART

picking up flight, good write, thanks.- Gajanan Mishra

ONE SUMMER MOON

Beautifully written, Satish ! - Happy Christmas! - Anne Lise Andresen

i like this nice.- DENISE NARAYADU

AN AGONISED PRAYER

The world is slowly turning bleak, to many crimes, ignorance and greed. Nice written poem, gets you questioning and lingering for more....- leahlopez

Wednesday, December 18, 2013

DESPERADO

" The spilled blood always
instigates to drink blood from the fountain head
of the sweet revenge"
Revenges, cruelty are disguising in different ways in the socity.Even the crime ,violence and genocide in the name of religion or some isms confer the sainthood to such persons or organisations who show their trophies of dried skulls!.
Wonderful poem, sir. -PURANIK R B, BANGALORE

Tuesday, December 17, 2013

AN AGONISED PRAYER

The world is slowly turning bleak, to many crimes, ignorance and greed. Nice written poem, gets you questioning and lingering for more....- leahlopez

UBIQUITOUS BEING

Very inspiring. As always, your always marvelous perspective.- Lady Dragonwyck