Thursday, June 5, 2014

GO AWAY

I am not sure of all the meanings, but there is a powerful emotional connection in these words. Re-reading....-Don Bouchard

Wednesday, June 4, 2014

PREPARING FOR NOTHINGNESS

Satish, as always, your poems have so much thought and power. "the inverted sea", caught my eye, we are a world of skeptics and worry of power. I, like yourself, continue to hope one day for peace. Life is short - why so many enemies?- Marcia Schechinger, USA

HONEY TRAP

nice poem Satish - deep feelings and thoughts.- Mohan Chutani

STARY THOUGHTS

Great write - I enjoyed reading this piece very much!- Pandita Sanchez

A Very Hurt Poem

Share your sense of hurt, Mr. Verma! Indeed, casual, mindless violence causes so much damage.... -Padmajka Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

Anaphylactic Shock

With proper estimation of self, motorcyclists, both literal and figurative, can avoid accidents, bloodshed, and shocks for getting their breaths on track. The narration has a speed that muddles the reader. Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Monday, June 2, 2014

MORSELS

Nice closing line.- Seema Chowdhury

LONE JOURNEY

…… STUNNED ME

A touching but truly sad poem....brilliant write sir.- Kaila George

Beautiful! as well as your present.-Light H2o

YOU AND EVERYBODY

I am always awed by what you write sir thank you for sharing.- Kaila George

…… Distant Shores

WHAT ENDING?

Sounds a tad irreligionalistic, tho' being that my mortal fabric has no conception of the before me, and only faith in the after me, I am bound by my beliefs to respect your philosophics, here -Frank James Ryan,


Anonymously

Profound in it's simplicity.-S34N

Sunday, June 1, 2014

Encircled GLOOM

Really cool write. Love the title too. :-)-Blessed614

Encircled GLOOM

for it is written and it shall come to faith - i feel the age of your pen and it's wisdom.-after vision