Monday, June 16, 2014

RAINS ARE COMING

Sounds like a forewarning from cosmos itself. Intense and dramatic write...- rain ...

Empty Dreams

good write well worded, have checked out the other poets on here?? -by Poetic T

Sunday, June 15, 2014

THE COMMITMENT

Love the last two stanzas of this poem. First because there is nothing more beautiful than the full moon and two because of its determination to face our trials head on. Nicely done!-  Colleen Courtney

Shame and fear

It is a poem for deep reading. -P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala

A paragon of marvelous poetry...wonderful write,sir.- partha sarathi paul, guskara-burdwan

Absolutely without frontier... the poem travels limitlesss with examples beyond range and compare. Warm regards,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

RAINS ARE COMING

Sounds like a forewarning from cosmos itself. Intense and dramatic write..- rain ...

Saturday, June 14, 2014

Bleeding Heart

I enjoyed this... And as an unrelated side note, that is my favorite flower.- Sweet Zingiber

This is an interesting poem. It's easy to forget our own mortality, and lose sight of what's truly important. - Dan Kross

Thursday, June 12, 2014

MAKE BELIEVING

Excellent write, Satish! Well done! Kindest regards.- Pandita Sanchez

THE ECHO REACHES THE WHOLE SKY

This is so quiet and as a reader gave me a solitary feeling, the ending snapping that for a second almost. I really enjoyed reading this. - Liquid Poetess

The Buddha was going to weep

Let us see what is now done with the melted walls. Warm regrds,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Very striking a feed thread you have given us! Sorrow is very much noted. I am glad I read this poignant work. Thanks you for sharing and congratulations on your win. Diane M Quinlan

Hi SATISH.. Just a quick note to congratulate you for having this impressive write posted on Soup's home page for the whole world to easily see.. Well, at least many poetry lovers will get to check it out. Blessings and keep writing wonderful works! -Lyric Man

SATISH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT loveSKAT A 

Monday, June 9, 2014

FALLING CRUMBS

'to wet the floor of grass, which stiches the earth' - neat line - I like it. - eleanor prince|

Saturday, June 7, 2014

POINSETTIA

Awesome write. I truly enjoyed reading it. Thanks, for sharing.- Sue_Pinkston

Thursday, June 5, 2014