Thursday, June 18, 2015

COMMENTRIES

Book of pain nicely opened. Yet, let's hope to see light at the end of the tunnel.-U Atreya Sarma, Pune

Yes Sir, time is running out. Back of her head is bald. futile to try to catch her.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

Give Me Some Poison To Live

How ironic what people generally take to die, poison in this case has to be taken for becoming alive again. Beautiful irony!- Iman ( @Iman_Singh )

Lips Of Moon Were Hot

The comparisons are just WOW! And I love the lines”concept of the sky was a lie” and “You had cheated the boat, you may not be lucky this time”- Iman ( @Iman_Singh ) 

Walking Down The Lane

Wonderful imagery. Nicely presented. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.- Kumarmani Mahakul

Wednesday, June 17, 2015

Kleptomaniac

Popular icons are idiotizing the worlds population, and the irony is the glory we associate with it.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq ) 

Tuesday, June 9, 2015

WAITING TO BLINK

This poem is lovely. I can't quite comprehend the meaning, but I know it is an intelligent write and it rolls off the tongue!-Anna Hopper 

Metaphysical View

Wow... This is so full of intellect on so many levels... Great job. - Michael Cardinal

Saturday, June 6, 2015

Today

Love this & the picture you're painting. Tfs. Check out some of my poems? - adrein blue

Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Soliciting

Wing pierced, like
butterfly amidst cacti,
still trying to reach your lips.

Thanks for this amazing poem, Sir. You have elevated the status of personal pain and suffering to something the world desires and craves for. Following lines are the most poignant ones.-Rajnish Manga

Tuesday, June 2, 2015

Armless Enemies

"The vortex of existence needs surgery."..."I am asking god to pray for me." So much food for thought in your lines as usual. Warm wishes for you. - Light H2o

Monday, June 1, 2015

Devoid Of Feverfew

There is a certain fear, a silent calming effect felt after reading this poem…-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )