Friday, July 24, 2015

Dream Landing

Your words are so beautiful and your poems feel so vast. I love the starting words "Candle by candle, you burn your dreams." It's just so beautifully said.- The Nameless

Thursday, July 23, 2015

Animation

Lovely ethereal imagery... :)-'stiltskin .

Such a potent sadness in this linguistic treat - - an unforgettable read.- Fay Slimm

Wednesday, July 22, 2015

The Wait

Wonderful poem. It's nice.-Claire Morris

Charred Mistakes

Morning Star

Love this. This is very similar to one of my poems. The surreal fiber is so real to me. It is what I call poetical reality. The platonic weave:
"Words would disappear,
only meaning will be left."
gives it a vivid poetic sensibility. The one that is out of reach in 'sensible reality.'

"The interval ceases to be" is profound reveals the arbitrary aspect of space. Though I am confused in the use of 'wasness'
Once more it is a platonic theme that death is kind of relief for the "lost childe whose burden was his taste." This works either way, whether if the taste itself is unbearable, or if regardless of being unbearable or pleasant, still, in itself, is a burden.

And perhaps the death is the morning star, a wake up in " The City of Utopia"-Gadfly

Verities

... expel of powerful blows of might living in the mind of the powerless pen, you have just extracted the venom of a mighty mind of the universe.God bless your a mindful poet Sir of this 21st century.- antonio liao

Monday, July 20, 2015

Acoustics Are Not Working

I love how your diction adds a splash of intensity to the whole canvas of your poem. What a beautiful poem! Keep writing! -Emily Liang ( @EmilyLiang )

Saturday, July 18, 2015

Friday, July 17, 2015

Annex the Belief

Nice thougts delicately expressed. How evocative are the concluding lines-
"To remain human in the loneliness of ruins
I want to walk straight."-U Atreya Sarma, Hyderabad