Cracking The Code

very deep, great write "Liars will tell the story of honour killing. We were tired of listening" My favorite lines.- Lucid dreamer

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Featureless and White

as usual the poem touches my heart...what shall we do to rectify the current issues? -veeraiyah subbulakshmi, Thanjavur

Marvelous write, stirs up some gory yet familiar images in the contemporary scene.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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Transmigration

Wonderful cadence. Past master in weaving a filigree of beauty of thought and imagery !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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The Tear Of Things

Brilliant in cadence and imagery. Consummate skill in manipulating language to convey passion. Awesome with stirring emotion and scathing remarks.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Cultural Drift

The beauty of music, of song, is that it stirs the heart. I remember hearing a childhood song in my later years that stirred up a faith in me when I needed it most. Your writing is so expressive. I have been reading it for quite some time. It takes honesty in self examination to write from the depths of your heart as you do. -AbbasEwe

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A Rebel Being Born

That’s a poem that stands on powerful legs.-Bill Peeler ( @konpreah )

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Unblaming

continuation was a little off but the overall effect and tone was pleasant.- Tyler Williams

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Waking Up

I truly enjoyed reading your poem. Your talent shines. Thanks, for sharing. -Sue_Pinkston

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Dirty Mirrors

Great message is conveyed beautifully in this poem. Mr. Verma has shown his wizardry in manipulating words and thoughts.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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But Truth Will Not…

Characteristic originality is showing in the verses. Good cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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On This Shore Of Life

It is so much poignant, An intense hopelessness pervades the poem. But it is still beautiful in its imagery and wonderful diction woven together.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Strange

This poem is great. It flows nicely though it has little to no rhyming words. You wrote this extremely well. A deffinition of art is something that makes you feel emotion: this my friend, is art.- Jacob Naccarato

A free verse poetry.... Nice to read... Tfs- Salim R Javed

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Deserted Wasteland

Such a soulful expression of the raw truth and angst of life, Sir Satish Verma.-Madhumathi. H, Chennai


Really beautiful...

We are helpless
But keep gloom on face
Who can show bravery over the issue?
If we sincerely evaluate and view

Let us not go so deep
And keep
Our selves totally seized
When it is really not faced.-hasmukh mehta , ahmedabad

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GOODBYE

Sad, and heart felt poem. Short but say so much. But there is another way out.-Milton Robertson 

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Welcome Sir!

An universal truth, nicely painted by Satish Verma, an impressive poem!-Akhtar Jawad ( @Akhtar_Jawad )

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