In Transit

Powerful ending

and I was amazed
by the idea captured
in great talons
and released
as or from or because
or into prophecy (magic & faith images)
enjoyed the surprise ending - allets

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The Wars

"...you know..."
an aside or a request for shared knowledge - The Wars - everywhere for everyone.- allets

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Acrimony

"...like sorcery..."
Got snagged on this line. The last verse/stanza defines poeting (& any creativity) for me.- allets

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A Sickened Craft

"plucked"
the finest word-choice for dismantling metaphysical or metaphoric stars .- allets

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A Wall Painting

"Contours of a dimmed tunnel." -- Ah Satish, you hit me where I live in this offering - allets

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The Untitled Erotica

A powerful write.- Seema Chowdhury

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Slaughtered Dreams

Intense write here. Hells fires rage throughout many cities destroying much in their way. I hope this write is not about you. JacieStralkoDuca

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Non – ‘I’

Nice imagery. Beautiful word play.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Cracking The Code

very deep, great write "Liars will tell the story of honour killing. We were tired of listening" My favorite lines.- Lucid dreamer

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Featureless and White

as usual the poem touches my heart...what shall we do to rectify the current issues? -veeraiyah subbulakshmi, Thanjavur

Marvelous write, stirs up some gory yet familiar images in the contemporary scene.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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Transmigration

Wonderful cadence. Past master in weaving a filigree of beauty of thought and imagery !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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The Tear Of Things

Brilliant in cadence and imagery. Consummate skill in manipulating language to convey passion. Awesome with stirring emotion and scathing remarks.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Cultural Drift

The beauty of music, of song, is that it stirs the heart. I remember hearing a childhood song in my later years that stirred up a faith in me when I needed it most. Your writing is so expressive. I have been reading it for quite some time. It takes honesty in self examination to write from the depths of your heart as you do. -AbbasEwe

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A Rebel Being Born

That’s a poem that stands on powerful legs.-Bill Peeler ( @konpreah )

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Unblaming

continuation was a little off but the overall effect and tone was pleasant.- Tyler Williams

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