Fastening

Bravo! Love this style satishverma!!!- Redbarchettadrive 

The imagery of "writing my name in water" is unique and plays like Ping pong in my head, love it!- Lina Lotus

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Smash The Book

This Verse is worth the Feel of a higher calling, justified in saying that you must have said, I Am, I Will and I Recall Every Monent that Led to these Words. Damn, you shook the ground and spoke it in your own tone. Thanx for being Poet, -warrior poet

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Ubiquitous Being

Fine poem. Excellent imagery. Beautiful cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Prometheus? Mon Frere? ?

Death consciousness becomes somewhat dramatic here but Intense passion and poetry pervades.
Excellent write.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Catch the Sunset

Make it glorious... catch the moment... nice one

The sun was at peak
But life did not pick
With suitable place
You were pushed out of race

You need not worry
And carry forward
The mission
And prove it was an accomplished admission.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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From Death To Death

Nice one... No loss of time....

Instead of dying and longing
It must be made full digging
Till it comes out with full satisfaction
And matching with resolve and action

So we seek
And speak
Each time
With no loss of time.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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Ravaged

Nicely put forward................

We have invaded everywhere
And ventured enough
To destroy the entire natural concept
The time is not far off for us to be wept

Ecological balance is threatened
Even though it is always condemned or criticized
But where are we today as part of civilized world?
We wish it to be clearly told -Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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EXTOLLING

Good question Satish :))-Maharani Phool 

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Tale-bearer

An intensely passionate poem. Poet beautifully emoted with exquisite imagery.-Aloke

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An Agonised Prayer

A poignant poem but it is beautiful in its poignancy. Death seems to be a staple penchant of the poet.
Cadence is good, wonderful imagery.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Shambhook…*”

Poem is heavy. Bu what an eloquent and elegant way of conveying it !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Mum Is The Word…

Wonderful. We can feel the resonance and warmth, Passion and skill work together to make a vibrant poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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NEW PATHWAYS

Just loving the title and then the meaning of the poem.very good.-Miraj Raha 

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Deleting

Fascinating word choices. Interesting tone.- Nico Reznick

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BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

epilation and stumilate
stumilate (simulate?) epilation: hair removal - the unflowing river could needs stimulation. Decapitation - not a word encountered often in modern times but great as a metaphor or reference to barbarism in 20th-21st Century (or wishful thinking).- allets

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