Sunday, December 20, 2015

Saturday, December 19, 2015

Erected In My Pain

This seems to be the picture of both, the victim and the victor. Much enjoyed the sharpness.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Homing

I enjoy reading your works. Please continue to share.-Ken

Schism

Wow. I'll read this several more times.- Xthe Owl

Friday, December 18, 2015

Full Stop

as paintures. and so many labels of reading, meaning and nice sounds when i read this loud. feets for my view from each of many windows at my house:) you give me a lot of hope with this one. thnx-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

lavels should be of course, sorry for my english.-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

Ending Of Time?

interesting piece with some intriguing imagery..-Ailill

i like it. as for me: simple and beauty. with pleasure i will read more-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

No Return

Down Tone
"...I want to say/what I did not want to say..." Nice -  allets

Renaissance

I Read This Poem
and think of Cuba. "...The bleeding revolution has overturned./tomorrow..."-— allets

Sparks In Woods

Beautiful, and moving poem.
Great imagery Mr. Verma.
All the Best .-J Nair

Wow...i'm mighty impressed with this poem...so drawing and complex. It beacons me to find its deeper meaning-yogi73

Song Above The Sorrow

What a lovely poem. Well idealised. I enjoyed reading.
Good work.-Busy Poet

Living Legend

i love it:) as for me pitty that i may give only one point here. so in comment: broken 8 :) just push this number on side and you have eternity:D or so many points from me as you wish-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

Like A Da Vinci

Excellent handling of the Da Vinci question. I especially admire your use of methapor.-gms583p 

This Day

Interesting, A bit disfunctional but I seem to like it, its certainly a good use of words, well done....malcol-qintarra

Dream Song

Very good. Imagery and very peaceful. - L.R. Thompson

Tuesday, December 15, 2015

Brooding Silently

Very deep and mysterious qualities lie within your write. I think I can read between the lines and see a deep sadness of one very confused and messed up life. Sometimes brooding silently is the best way as not to add insult to injury. Although this world is filled with love hatred still abides as well. Hugs yourself today because you are worth it. -JacieStralkoDuca