Wounded Path

I have read two of your poems and it saddens me that more people haven't seen them. Your words are beautiful and difficult and deserve a much larger audience.-JustABird

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Otherness

"Fear hauls you up on the
brazen rocks, you stand
alone in sun to find your toes
breaking the sound waves."

This is superb.Thank you.-lysistrata

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Visualization

"The misty moon has scattered your shadow over my cage
Watch how this drowned bird would turn into a passionate wave."

That's my poetic answer to your "Visualization"...
I like it.-lysistrata

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Degenerating

Truly beautiful imagery that really made me stop and think, exceedingly well done, look forward to seeing more.-W. G. Simms

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Silver Trails

I love the way you put words together. Powerfully and interestingly written! I also love the refusal to accept half-dead poems. Great line!-VH42

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Today

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good African-American Music, Caribbean-American Mths, in the USA, to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A musical and cool poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity; ethereal and real relations in time, space, and life make it worth reading again and again. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Namaste. Matutinally Yours, james-reality1

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Botanically

Some of your images in this one are really powerful! I also love the line, "I will not accept a half-lip." The last stanza is fantastic!-VH42

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Regenerating

I like the way you put words together. I especially like the third stanza.-VH42

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Smiling Buddha

Dear Satishverma, Ni hao. Good Struggle With Emperor Constantine's Dictating Christianity Be Empire Building (called the Bible) Month to you. Thanx for the excellent write. A dark yet musical and cool while hot poetic tapestry, weaved well with imagery, insight, emotional integrity. Consider entering a poem into weekly Starlite Cafe Challenges: 'A Bird's Eye View, Anew', or, 'It Takes Three Plus One (to make a collaboration)' :). Thanx for all you do! Enjoy your eve'. Sayonara. Matutinally Yours, -reality1 

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Sovereignty

I like the juxtaposition of the breast tumor, which blocks the flow of milk (and possibly the flow of a life) and the "tragic flow of history". Also the image of "an Adonis to stitch the wounds of angels".-VH42

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Eternal Cuddle

Eternal cuddle? The term actually made me chuckle a bit.-Celeste Silver

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Saturn Will Shortly Rise

I really liked this a lot-there's so much meaning and thoughts in this write. Well done--Brenda

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Gather The Sun

"I gather the sun in my poems" - such a wonderful last line following a very powerful poem. May the 'gathered sun 'shine out from your poems. Thanks for sharing. -Arvil Meallem, Israel

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LIVING DANGEROUSLY

Great write Satish..-Silent One 

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DECIDUOUSLY

Nice ... Beautifully said ...-Probir Gupta 

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