Lake Scenes

I like it, a lovely scene constructed in verse!- grant

Brilliant poem, the dragonfly, Lake Huron in flames...wow.-Kw6fay

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Unfog The Sky

An example of your abiding talent here my friend - one of your gifts of excellent imagery lights up the verse - a poet's poem which I wish to read again and again - thank you for sharing it Satish my friend.- Fay Slimm

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Ressurection

An emotional piece. I particularly liked the first stanza where the wind writes and the sun wipes away.Might I just suggest that nowhere is usually written as one word. -Milly Hayward

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Dedication

nice...nature is not so harmoniums in the hands of modern men now as your verse is....
really enjoyable....a spontaneous flow of deep thinking of the polluted earth...
a good sharing.-B.m. Biswas

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Untitled

Bliss of looking back
at unreached peaks of pain.
Great imagery. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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A Black Speech

The beginning of this poem, highlights our inability to opt for renunciation..Thank you for sharing Satish Vermanji..-V S

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Full Stop

Excellent and involving, as it were. I wouldn't have used the last line at all. Besides, isn't 'returning back' a tautology.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Noesis

Invoking the sun, you stay in shadows,
without qualms to hear
the swish of swords.
Beautiful lines. Thanks for the sharing.
10 for the nice poem.-Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Whirling Dervish

once upon a time i was there; the evening explained and poetically written by a true human, satish vermaji.. thank you sir... Not any more, I visit such a horrible place of loneliness! ! !-V S

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To Know What We Do Not Know

To know what we do not know, for now at least,
we must first learn what we're now ignorant of
then we'll be able to say with convincing words
whatever we know and perhaps be understood.-George Krokos

In anguish I search the answers
to deepest mysteries.
Profound introspective write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Never Wanting

Black versus black will
not brighten the screen. One third of
generation had the criminal record.

What an observation! I like your style and presentation....10-Sriranji Aratisankar

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Infinitude

The pursuit of location
where the eclipse descends like a dot
on truth.

I am going to touch
the surreal constellation
again in your wet eyes.

Good expression of feelings...thanks for sharing...10...-Sriranji Aratisankar

A beautifully conceived poem with deep meaning. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Never Again

The moon drenched lake
wails for the boat not to come.
Beautiful and realistic conceptualization of feelings in the timeless dawn. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Sheela-Na-Gig

You are a very unique writer and deep...This one I like very much... -Pharaoh33

Wonderful write.-Tony36

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Stoned

whoa this is intense as hell! No remorse for wrongs wrought?- mrpoofs

A great verb - morph

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