for me, this is astute social commentary... but i do hope to see a world that doesn't inflict violence on every family... or a world where every family doesn't inflict violence within and thereby assault the world... ~ violence of any kind is just too damaging and hard to accept in any form...-serah .
Tuesday, November 22, 2016
Tree Of Light Dances
I'm not sure I understand all of this but I enjoyed reading your poem. Really good descriptive write..liked..-Jazmine Reid
Beautiful write, loved this.Madeira
Gather The Sun
To Laugh Or To Weep
Grief Unspoken
An abstract poem which reads profoundly. All the best with your creative writing. -Summersounds68
Irreverent
Very nice poem, great use of metaphor, the words also contain a strong visual component which I think makes them really tangible. "yellow paper" for example, can be understood in a primal way. I love stream-of-consciousness style poetry and feel that this is of that style. Nice work.-Oneyedtoad
Monday, November 21, 2016
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