A Celestial Missive

Excellent poem my friend , Thanks.. iip-Is It Poetry

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Entering Sanctum Sanctorum

'A sacred lotus emerges
from the navel, while you rest
on trembling waves. I am shedding
my leaves.'
vibrant imagery, intriguing.-Terry Craddock

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Giving A Miss

'Breasts plundered―
galaxies were ready to
reglitter the dark moons.

Why to hide anything,
when you don't possess
any earthly gifts? '

wonderful contrasts in imagery between lines and stanzas 10+-Terry Craddock

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Metempsychosis

The poem seems to be an in indictment of a section of our society which savours and relishes their baser instincts which ultimately violates our social fabric. Thanks, SV Sir.
In smoke screen you
become a lizard, creeping on lips,
hips, and chest of an ignorant person.-Rajnish Manga

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When The Attack Comes

I enjoyed this very much
Comment: Evocative and concise, ambiguous yet rich with symbolic specifics, this is a delightful little gem of a poem. Thank you for sharing it.-Michael Nabert

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Lips And Wordless Miracle

A beautiful poem with lots of twists and turns. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.-Anil Kumar Panda

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Paradise

A casual read and much delighting.-Lucas Woods 

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Engagements

This is just lovely-your imagery is always so lush.-Brenda

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Transitional Edge

The poem is philosophical. Good share.-Rajiv Ajjibal, Sirsi,Uttara Kannada,Karnataka

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For A Cause

Nice lines, in fact it's meaning has trapped in your beauteous lines... -Muhammad Rashid PK, KOZHIKODE

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Unyielding

I really like this style. There is always a fine line between senseless gibberish and meaningful prose. Your words seem carefully chosen vs haphazardly throw together. Even when they're not understood; a much deeper meaning is obviously apparent. -NotAboutMe

the description is quite mesmerizing
really enjoyed!

keep writing :)-Tazeen Ahmed 

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Reviled And Revered

Your writings seem like something one would find in an ancient scroll. You are very gifted at sharing the pain of the human condition. These words seem very relatable; whether they are taken literally or as analogy. -NotAboutMe 

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In Totality

Wow - the way you express this is very powerful. Especially the last line. I read the poem twice, and I am having some trouble understanding it, but sometimes I think that's the best thing in a poem - so we might contemplate our own meanings.-Anais Grey

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Jottings

Strings of music pulled from recent and distant history - a salad. -allets 

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Meditation

That is so you! A peace image or call for quiet - nice - allets 

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