Friday, December 23, 2016

Muse And Sorrow

IT'S AN AGE OF ELECTRONIC TORTURE TO THE INNOCENT. PLEASE, TAKE CARE OF THEM. I ENJOY YOUR POEMS SO MUCH.- Sidhan

For A Forgotton Story

I read you and enjoy but often fear commenting thank you for sharing- Sid "de" knees

Sanity

Hi. Happy Thanx/Mourning Day in the USA. Panoplay of imagery and understated aspiration/action weaves a mysterious and breezy poetic tapestry; thanx. Namaste.-reality1

Moving Shadows

Tender writings my Friend-SuperSlimJim 

Insight

CRUEL BONHOMIE

Interesting, impressive, strange perspective beyond the cruelty and BONHOMIE.Congrat-Ovidiu Bocsa

FROM THE WOMB

Beautiful visions, Satish, a questioning spirit, makes the reader feel complete.-Doug Vinson

Endless Yearning

A superb write Satish!-Pauline Miller 

Invisible Ink

very good Satish. -Alan Brown 

A Celestial Missive

Excellent poem my friend , Thanks.. iip-Is It Poetry

Entering Sanctum Sanctorum

'A sacred lotus emerges
from the navel, while you rest
on trembling waves. I am shedding
my leaves.'
vibrant imagery, intriguing.-Terry Craddock

Giving A Miss

'Breasts plundered―
galaxies were ready to
reglitter the dark moons.

Why to hide anything,
when you don't possess
any earthly gifts? '

wonderful contrasts in imagery between lines and stanzas 10+-Terry Craddock

Metempsychosis

The poem seems to be an in indictment of a section of our society which savours and relishes their baser instincts which ultimately violates our social fabric. Thanks, SV Sir.
In smoke screen you
become a lizard, creeping on lips,
hips, and chest of an ignorant person.-Rajnish Manga

When The Attack Comes

I enjoyed this very much
Comment: Evocative and concise, ambiguous yet rich with symbolic specifics, this is a delightful little gem of a poem. Thank you for sharing it.-Michael Nabert

Lips And Wordless Miracle

A beautiful poem with lots of twists and turns. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.-Anil Kumar Panda