IT'S AN AGE OF ELECTRONIC TORTURE TO THE INNOCENT. PLEASE, TAKE CARE OF THEM. I ENJOY YOUR POEMS SO MUCH.- Sidhan
Friday, December 23, 2016
For A Forgotton Story
Sanity
Hi. Happy Thanx/Mourning Day in the USA. Panoplay of imagery and understated aspiration/action weaves a mysterious and breezy poetic tapestry; thanx. Namaste.-reality1
CRUEL BONHOMIE
Interesting, impressive, strange perspective beyond the cruelty and BONHOMIE.Congrat-Ovidiu Bocsa
FROM THE WOMB
Beautiful visions, Satish, a questioning spirit, makes the reader feel complete.-Doug Vinson
Endless Yearning
A superb write Satish!-Pauline Miller
Invisible Ink
very good Satish. -Alan Brown
Entering Sanctum Sanctorum
'A sacred lotus emerges
from the navel, while you rest
on trembling waves. I am shedding
my leaves.'
vibrant imagery, intriguing.-Terry Craddock
from the navel, while you rest
on trembling waves. I am shedding
my leaves.'
vibrant imagery, intriguing.-Terry Craddock
Giving A Miss
'Breasts plundered―
galaxies were ready to
reglitter the dark moons.
Why to hide anything,
when you don't possess
any earthly gifts? '
wonderful contrasts in imagery between lines and stanzas 10+-Terry Craddock
galaxies were ready to
reglitter the dark moons.
Why to hide anything,
when you don't possess
any earthly gifts? '
wonderful contrasts in imagery between lines and stanzas 10+-Terry Craddock
Metempsychosis
The poem seems to be an in indictment of a section of our society which savours and relishes their baser instincts which ultimately violates our social fabric. Thanks, SV Sir.
In smoke screen you
become a lizard, creeping on lips,
hips, and chest of an ignorant person.-Rajnish Manga
In smoke screen you
become a lizard, creeping on lips,
hips, and chest of an ignorant person.-Rajnish Manga
When The Attack Comes
I enjoyed this very much
Comment: Evocative and concise, ambiguous yet rich with symbolic specifics, this is a delightful little gem of a poem. Thank you for sharing it.-Michael Nabert
Comment: Evocative and concise, ambiguous yet rich with symbolic specifics, this is a delightful little gem of a poem. Thank you for sharing it.-Michael Nabert
Lips And Wordless Miracle
A beautiful poem with lots of twists and turns. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.-Anil Kumar Panda
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