Wednesday, June 21, 2017

In Deep Anguish

Thinking of relation, of
connectivity between love
and hate, war and peace in my
tumultuous mind― //.... The poem is a reflection of acute pain and disgust of a soul left to fight for its place in this unkind world. Very heart touching expression. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

Saturday, June 17, 2017

Edge of Revenge

Poignant! Killing.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

The Condemned

Yes I agree, that is perhaps the only way, kissing the condemned. There are no foreigners now, it is true in some context, in every context, for there are no foreigners. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

A thought-provoking and emotional write, Satish Verma Sir. Your condemnation is powerful as you 'wrench the emotions out of the poem'. -Leonard Dabydeen, Brampton, Ontario, Canada

Crowding

Astounding work as always-Em

Friday, June 16, 2017

Coming Full Circle

There is something very mystical that overwhelms the reader's sensibilities. Thanks. I quote:
Transfixed I enter / the still life. You come
out with bound hands / to say goodbye.-Rajnish Manga

Flying The Names

There were no tears / no pangs. No agony / Peace.
Were you jinxed? / I would never know.
@@@ Surrealism just as in arts. Fine expression. Thanks for sharing.-Rajnish Manga

Downward Spiral

Amazing expression. It reflects the anguish of a man who is concerned with killings and spilling of blood of innocent children, women and men in the world today. Thanks, Verma ji.
Cannibals. All the gods
were cannibals, devouring.... their progeny.-Rajnish Manga

We Shan't Die

Not damaged
by untruths, remaining
entirely human, among
the wolves and brutes.
I set my foot for a new journey.
@@@ Amazing philosophical poem seeking to unravel the mysteries of human existence. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

After Leaving The Home

All of your verses are deeply gorgeous, and leave me to ponder their meaning.-Heather T

Wednesday, June 14, 2017