It says nearly everything about the circus show with the refrain coming like a sad and entertaining joker. Marvellous.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata
Saturday, July 8, 2017
Laughing Skull
Confusing by design. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata
A captivating read. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
A captivating read. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi
A Love Story
A nice, nostalgic love story. Different from your usual themes. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Afraid of whom?
If I have understood you properly, yes, faith doesn't provide all the answers and could be seen as naive sometimes. But it does extend moral courage to see us through the difficult phases of life. Faith to the uninitiated is akin to intellect of the philosopher. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad
Wednesday, July 5, 2017
Earthy Smell
It is a beautiful philosophical poem with captivating collocation. It may be quoted.. A temple becomes
a monument, without deity.
There was only one survivor,
the godless curse. Thanks for sharing. -Kumarmani Mahakul
a monument, without deity.
There was only one survivor,
the godless curse. Thanks for sharing. -Kumarmani Mahakul
Tuesday, July 4, 2017
Monday, July 3, 2017
Earthy Smell
It is a beautiful philosophical poem with captivating collocation. It may be quoted.. A temple becomes
a monument, without deity.
There was only one survivor,
the godless curse. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul
a monument, without deity.
There was only one survivor,
the godless curse. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul
The Birth Pangs
A sad piece. What I get from it is a mother that has lost her child. Having people close to me that have it touches me. Thank you for sharing, it was great.-Damien Ridge
Absurdity
"...bail out/the saint of fallen apes..." if the tree is a rood and the bail out redemption and humanity then absurdities abound.- allets
Great powerful poem I feel the middle stanza could be left out and it would still be as powerful! Fantastic write! Of course I expect nothing less from you x hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - SSmoothieNew
Great powerful poem I feel the middle stanza could be left out and it would still be as powerful! Fantastic write! Of course I expect nothing less from you x hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - SSmoothieNew
Sunday, July 2, 2017
The Closed Windo
Interesting piece. Could be a few possibilities for meaning and that's what makes a poem extra special. Thanks for making me think!-Damien Ridge
Saturday, July 1, 2017
Mother’s Day
These Lines Say
"...She had a scented presence in the sunset.
I will weave a pattern,
of shooting stars in the black sky..."-allets
"...She had a scented presence in the sunset.
I will weave a pattern,
of shooting stars in the black sky..."-allets
The Whispering Silence
Beautifully written..Thank you so much for sharing.-Derena
A magical beautiful poem..-Floreann Cawley
A magical beautiful poem..-Floreann Cawley
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