Saturday, July 8, 2017

Truth Will Not Multiply

It says nearly everything about the circus show with the refrain coming like a sad and entertaining joker. Marvellous.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Laughing Skull

Confusing by design. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

A captivating read. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi 

A Love Story

A nice, nostalgic love story. Different from your usual themes. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Afraid of whom?

If I have understood you properly, yes, faith doesn't provide all the answers and could be seen as naive sometimes. But it does extend moral courage to see us through the difficult phases of life. Faith to the uninitiated is akin to intellect of the philosopher. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Strange Happenings

Downhill Journey

This is fantastic and such ashame it's been missed.-Em

Wednesday, July 5, 2017

Earthy Smell

It is a beautiful philosophical poem with captivating collocation. It may be quoted.. A temple becomes
a monument, without deity.
There was only one survivor,
the godless curse. Thanks for sharing. -Kumarmani Mahakul

Tuesday, July 4, 2017

Monday, July 3, 2017

Earthy Smell

It is a beautiful philosophical poem with captivating collocation. It may be quoted.. A temple becomes
a monument, without deity.
There was only one survivor,
the godless curse. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

The Birth Pangs

A sad piece. What I get from it is a mother that has lost her child. Having people close to me that have it touches me. Thank you for sharing, it was great.-Damien Ridge 

Absurdity

"...bail out/the saint of fallen apes..." if the tree is a rood and the bail out redemption and humanity then absurdities abound.- allets

Great powerful poem I feel the middle stanza could be left out and it would still be as powerful! Fantastic write! Of course I expect nothing less from you x hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - SSmoothieNew

Sunday, July 2, 2017

The Closed Windo

Interesting piece. Could be a few possibilities for meaning and that's what makes a poem extra special. Thanks for making me think!-Damien Ridge

Saturday, July 1, 2017

Mother’s Day

These Lines Say
"...She had a scented presence in the sunset.
I will weave a pattern,
of shooting stars in the black sky..."-allets

The Whispering Silence

Beautifully written..Thank you so much for sharing.-Derena

A magical beautiful poem..-Floreann Cawley

Malignancy