Sunday, December 17, 2017
Friday, December 15, 2017
Imploring
This realisation sets one free.-Supratik Sen
Thursday, December 14, 2017
Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Taking Sand Bath
Satish, each stanza a mystery to themselves. A fine write.-Robert Murray Smith
Parentheses
Yes, there is no point adding sugar to the sea.-Supratik Sen
"Adding sugar to sea", very nice Supratik. It added beauty to the poem.-R R Gandikota
"Adding sugar to sea", very nice Supratik. It added beauty to the poem.-R R Gandikota
Sunday, December 10, 2017
Renouncing
Questions that do not have answers, unless someone takes a plunge. -Supratik Sen
Saturday, December 9, 2017
Deterrence
I liked the image of caressing the mimosa, like a metaphor for vulnerable love? The third stanza 'The spontaneous probe will start the construct..' is very intriguing, but I wonder if it could be expressed more simply. I liked the abstract feel of this though. It feels like I am walking through time, touching and feeling.-monono
Thursday, December 7, 2017
Let's Think
A philosophically analytical poem. Thanks for sharing. I quote:
a minimal existence.... and quantum pain,
Why there was war against the war.... when nobody wins?-Rajnish Manga
a minimal existence.... and quantum pain,
Why there was war against the war.... when nobody wins?-Rajnish Manga
Ending Was A Ceremony
Yes and that becomes a ceremony... strange but true. The poem's quiet and firm tone is appealing.-
Supratik Sen
Supratik Sen
Wednesday, December 6, 2017
Disoriented
..."abduction-of a mystic"...was a great use with the former line. I understand that phrase on several levels. So much more to say, too little space to write.-Yahchanan AbiyaH
Tuesday, December 5, 2017
The Perceiver
This sure shines in the lines of poetry it made me smile.-SuperSlimJim
Monday, December 4, 2017
Tragedies
This reminds me of a few different pieces, such as the kidnap poem by Nikki Giovanni and the circus is cheaper when it rains by Iain S. Thomas.
It reminds me of kidnap because of the style, the flow, the swiftness and the subtlety of the words even though they carry intense power. And the circus is cheaper when it rains because of the emotion and the imagery and the uniqueness of the message being presented. I am in no way saying this is plagerism, I am simply appreciating the connection I was able to make, because in truth this is incredibly different from both, but has similar roots - if that makes sense.
I also really enjoy your voice here, and I'm eager to read more of your work in the future.-BlueJay
It reminds me of kidnap because of the style, the flow, the swiftness and the subtlety of the words even though they carry intense power. And the circus is cheaper when it rains because of the emotion and the imagery and the uniqueness of the message being presented. I am in no way saying this is plagerism, I am simply appreciating the connection I was able to make, because in truth this is incredibly different from both, but has similar roots - if that makes sense.
I also really enjoy your voice here, and I'm eager to read more of your work in the future.-BlueJay
Icing
We'll never be able to control this planet, try though we might. I think as a race, we're incredibly arrogant to believe that we can. The earth is on a journey all of its own and was very busy with that long before humans popped up for the ride, and it will continue its journey long after we've self-destructed
I love this thought provoking piece :-)-Kitty Cat Lady
I love this thought provoking piece :-)-Kitty Cat Lady
Saturday, December 2, 2017
Undressing
Nicely articulated poem with unique expressions. Thanks for sharing, Mr Verma.
when words start screaming. like howls of wolverines.-Rajnish Manga
when words start screaming. like howls of wolverines.-Rajnish Manga
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