Sunday, December 17, 2017

Friday, December 15, 2017

Imploring

This realisation sets one free.-Supratik Sen

Thursday, December 14, 2017

Wednesday, December 13, 2017

Between The Accidents

Taking Sand Bath

Satish, each stanza a mystery to themselves. A fine write.-Robert Murray Smith

Parentheses

Yes, there is no point adding sugar to the sea.-Supratik Sen

"Adding sugar to sea", very nice Supratik. It added beauty to the poem.-R R Gandikota

Sunday, December 10, 2017

Renouncing

Questions that do not have answers, unless someone takes a plunge. -Supratik Sen

Saturday, December 9, 2017

Deterrence

I liked the image of caressing the mimosa, like a metaphor for vulnerable love? The third stanza 'The spontaneous probe will start the construct..' is very intriguing, but I wonder if it could be expressed more simply. I liked the abstract feel of this though. It feels like I am walking through time, touching and feeling.-monono 

Thursday, December 7, 2017

Let's Think

A philosophically analytical poem. Thanks for sharing. I quote:
a minimal existence.... and quantum pain,
Why there was war against the war.... when nobody wins?-Rajnish Manga

Ending Was A Ceremony

Yes and that becomes a ceremony... strange but true. The poem's quiet and firm tone is appealing.-
Supratik Sen

Wednesday, December 6, 2017

Disoriented

..."abduction-of a mystic"...was a great use with the former line. I understand that phrase on several levels. So much more to say, too little space to write.-Yahchanan AbiyaH

Tuesday, December 5, 2017

Monday, December 4, 2017

Tragedies

This reminds me of a few different pieces, such as the kidnap poem by Nikki Giovanni and the circus is cheaper when it rains by Iain S. Thomas.

It reminds me of kidnap because of the style, the flow, the swiftness and the subtlety of the words even though they carry intense power. And the circus is cheaper when it rains because of the emotion and the imagery and the uniqueness of the message being presented. I am in no way saying this is plagerism, I am simply appreciating the connection I was able to make, because in truth this is incredibly different from both, but has similar roots - if that makes sense.

I also really enjoy your voice here, and I'm eager to read more of your work in the future.-BlueJay

Icing

We'll never be able to control this planet, try though we might. I think as a race, we're incredibly arrogant to believe that we can. The earth is on a journey all of its own and was very busy with that long before humans popped up for the ride, and it will continue its journey long after we've self-destructed
I love this thought provoking piece :-)-Kitty Cat Lady

Saturday, December 2, 2017

Undressing

Nicely articulated poem with unique expressions. Thanks for sharing, Mr Verma.
when words start screaming. like howls of wolverines.-Rajnish Manga