Under The Cloud

Amazingly written as usual.-Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

i especially love the first few lines and your reference to the sing song teapot .. i just love the wording in this poem. truly enjoyed.-charlotte connolly

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The Nature

Weaving words like these is a true gift.-Lawless

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Unexisting

The voice of the departed soul resonates in the stark darkness of your poem. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Last lines were so intense and impactful. TFS.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Secret Deals

Intense lines accenuating the violent, monstrous night. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

What a depth of thought. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Vendetta

the pain is equivalent to the

the pain is equivalent to the idolatry which always being a substitute is filled with more convenient one. Interesting write nice ideas making a complex mix of imagery. Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

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Commentary On Last Wishes

The poem unfolds with philosophical undertones at different levels. Expressed nicely.
Did you jump into a
dry pool to know
the depth of sky.-Rajnish Manga

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Implacable

A great poem transcending the average intellect. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Breakthough

Another thought provoking piece. I enjoy reading your poems because they are so deep with many interpretations that I find I have to keep reading and rereading to find new nuances. Best wishes.-Milly x

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Taboos

Too hard to understand. -KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka

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Dying Art

'The snow capped peaks...green fires...for the running tribes' - intriguing lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Loving Our World

I always enjoy reading your material. There is so much substance to it. It makes me pause and think. That's a good thing!-heritage

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Unsucceeding

Intense lines sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Thoughts rush at much vast speed than ours.. these words give depth to those emotions.-Devika Chhibber, Ambala

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Personal Loss

Quite fascinating and philosophical. Thanks, Satish ji.
The fall was / imminent.
I wait for the snow / to bury my past.-Rajnish Manga

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Loss Of Identity

I enjoy the words & flow of your poem. Opposite meanings seem to stand out. Yet beyond that I seem to lose my own identity while trying to understand what it all means. I would sure like to hear from you and any comments you would like to share with me. Until then I'll have to feel a little like Erick Church, Mr. Misunderstood. -jvaughan

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Song Of Promotion

A WELL WRITTEN POEM, TOO PHILOSOPHICAL BY NATURE BUT VERY MEANINGFUL.-sette 

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