We Will Not Part

VERY GOOD POEM.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

What an aura of romance the poem creates! So different from your usual verses Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Beautiful composition and well depicted emotions.-Padmavathi, Khammam

It's too beautiful, sir. Enjoyed reading it.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Very beautiful poem Satish Verma!
The brevity and conciseness of the words chosen is wonderful. Beautifully written!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Some Thinking Space

a great read. thanks for sharing.-psychofemale

Mutilation is at our core. Thinking contradicts innate essence.-Lawless

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Not Your Doings

a lovely write, well written and painted a beautiful picture.-psychofemale

A good write.-orchidee

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Dumb Dolls

Marvelous poem, Satish....-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Soothsayer Has Nothing To Say

Intetesting, as always, to read you.
. . . silent soothsayer.-Morningglory

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In Restraint

An excellent expression of your inner self!-Laura

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What Times

I really liked this poem, very unique. With little words evoking such imagery. Great work.-DarkNDangerous

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Trapped Wishes

Very touching Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Very heart touching- simple, short yet meaningful poem!
How beautifully the poet compares the aging concerns with a quake- struck building!
“As flames are dying’ shows a little pessimism but the poet is strong enough and hopeful of starting afresh as he wishes to ‘script a new song’.
The last line of the poem …”In twilight of age” says it all.
Beautiful poem Satish Verma!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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All You Know

Awesome inference, The fever was mystical.
In delirium you will recite
a poem It is a tragedy that it is factual. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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In Vacuum

Nice imagery.-SerenWise

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Cosmetic Effect

Apt images in play. The subtlety between virtual and actual is expressed well. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Debating Point

Some of the choices of phrase in this are wonderful. I particularly liked 'the game was fair but the players were dishonest'! I like the short stanzas as well, as it allows you to compact your ideas.-PatrickPink 

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Existential

A profound poem, Satish....10.-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Soft Music

It Has Been Long
Since I was too stoned to read. Period. Late 20's early 30's maybe.-allets

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In Praise Of Unknowing

such an interesting read.-psychofemale

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