Sunday, February 17, 2019

Eclipsing

" The fair queen has
a scar on forehead. Third
eye was waning."
Fantastic flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Thinking Deeply About Something

I think your mind is the most malleable I have seen, at least in this site; for example this: 
"The fixing magnifies your
scars. Do not go deep
in the veins. "
Wow only wow.-BOB GALLO

Saturday, February 16, 2019

Cause And Reality

Satishverma,
An Excellent write and a great question you have posed...
“Can we undo the damage
and become friends?
Unuttered, but still vocal.”-Laura

Not Like Me

Differences between a couple beautifully expressed. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Friday, February 15, 2019

Tuesday, February 12, 2019

Grieving

A well crafted poem, Satish......-Bernard F. Asuncion

How Will You Do It?

The moon does know.-Lawless

Such Was Our Planet

This is more than a climate change warning! I hope that Noah is able to accommodate all of us in his ark this time around!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

In Emptiness

Thanks for the profound share.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Monday, February 11, 2019

In Quiteude

Sometimes, it's inevitable, I think to stop ourselves from walking towards them even though it hurts, but then it hurts either way when we're pulled away by force...
I like the tone of this write, and it's very close to how I myself write at times, I'd say.
Acceptance or rather defeat, despite wanting something else, is what I got from this poem.
Interesting read. -Dr. YumnaKay 

So Much To Think

Every December snow
becomes a shroud.
Intensity in the emotions flowing through the poem is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Friday, February 8, 2019

We The Possessed

marble! brilliant darkness!-Doug Bentley

We Will Not Part

VERY GOOD POEM.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

What an aura of romance the poem creates! So different from your usual verses Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Beautiful composition and well depicted emotions.-Padmavathi, Khammam

It's too beautiful, sir. Enjoyed reading it.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Very beautiful poem Satish Verma!
The brevity and conciseness of the words chosen is wonderful. Beautifully written!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala