Saturday, April 13, 2019

New Invasion

Hello dear friend, you have penned this well with a clear message understood.You have been a joy to read and I wish you much love and tenderness. Take care..jenikawhispers

Marking The Graves

"Moon moves on"
I like that line. Interesting to contemplate - allets

Friday, April 12, 2019

Posing Questions

The intricacies of the unknown path. The mind is a terrible thing to taste sometimes.-Johnny Lawless

Becoming A Totem

A fantastic write, sir Satish.....10+++++++++ -Bernard F. Asuncion

Thursday, April 11, 2019

Empty Bowls

touches me-
You were not immortal
I had lost my speech
in my pain's birth.../// beautifully penned this poem.-Mahtab Bangalee

Inspiring poem, hope is the only way out when bowl is empty and prayers are the constant source of filling it up, A thoughtful poem.-Mohammed Asim Nehal

Matter Of Fate

A wonderful poem penned here.I love your word choices and how the poem flowed along.The story behind your words easily understood.I enjoyed reading this.I send you love and happiness.-jenikawhispers

Tuesday, April 9, 2019

Graceful

An excellent poetic expression, sir Satish....-Bernard F. Asuncion

Frost Was Setting In

Hello Im a newbie here and have just finished reading your poem and wish to tell you how much I enjoyed the read. Your piece is full of emotion felt and visuals seen clearly. I love the story behind your words.You have penned this beautifully .I wish you well with love and happiness.-jenikawhispers

Saturday, April 6, 2019

Ask Me

For the shake of moon I say, this is definitely a very brilliant poem shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul

An introspection related celebration, based on hard earned wisdom and experiences. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Strange Eyebaths

I always enjoy your work.-eleven_eleven

Golden Afternoon

Unreachable

'The rivals bloom,
without water of eyes.
O daisy, I was run over
by the stamping of clouds.

Give me the speed of light.'

Simply wonderful. -Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Wednesday, April 3, 2019

New Sports

wow, how wonderful expression this is-
I would defy
the death, but life
defeats me...///-Mahtab Bangalee

Message of love motivates many. When moon sleeps, stars play chess. This is an excellent poem very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Spelling Out

This is quite interesting! Good job!-Zia Mikaela

Tuesday, April 2, 2019

Unmaking Love

wisdom writings-
Who believes in
one's own death,
to be born again like a
third person. /// penned beautifully.-Mahtab Bangalee