Monday, June 29, 2020
Taking Sand Bath
Although I am not sure I am correctly reading the poem's implied back story (that is my fault, not the poem's), its sheer evocative power compensates for any misreading on my part. I really like the mystery provided by the evocation.-Starward
Saviour Was Sad
Beautiful lines..
First poem was
written for unborn you
in my turbulent life
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
First poem was
written for unborn you
in my turbulent life
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Saturday, June 27, 2020
Priest Writes On Wall
Never read anything so beautiful about pain dying... Good work sir...-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi
Thursday, June 25, 2020
Watching A Miracle
Beautiful lines...
Be strong to honor
the dignity of the human
patience in flames.
Lovely verse Satish ji...as always!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Be strong to honor
the dignity of the human
patience in flames.
Lovely verse Satish ji...as always!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India
Wednesday, June 24, 2020
Monday, June 22, 2020
Sunday, June 21, 2020
Leaves Are Changing Colors
Loved the lines :
Vestigial pain
was insulting. You always
feel a presence.- Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal
Vestigial pain
was insulting. You always
feel a presence.- Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal
Saturday, June 20, 2020
Reciting The Fake Poem
you joined the bomb squad
of poems.
Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle
of poems.
Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle
Friday, June 19, 2020
Thursday, June 18, 2020
Reciting The Fake Poem
you joined the bomb squad of poems.
Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle
Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle
Going Insane
A smoke signal is all it needs.-Rini Markle
To perceive
And to be perceived
Are two faces of the same coin
Only difference is
One is visible
And the other is hidden.
Respecting each others word
Honours every human being
And looking good over bad
Always makes matter cool
Win or loss is not the matter
Just changing angle is needed
To work things better.
Very true Sir things go insane that way only.-Varsha M
To perceive
And to be perceived
Are two faces of the same coin
Only difference is
One is visible
And the other is hidden.
Respecting each others word
Honours every human being
And looking good over bad
Always makes matter cool
Win or loss is not the matter
Just changing angle is needed
To work things better.
Very true Sir things go insane that way only.-Varsha M
Wednesday, June 17, 2020
The Earthen Death
For the most part, I read your poems but most of the times I’m not sure what they are about. :(
All I know is that some of them capture me. Thanks for sharing with us.-Everlasting
All I know is that some of them capture me. Thanks for sharing with us.-Everlasting
History Repeats
A bit confused on what it means. Is it about a vampire? I'm very curious to its meaning.-MantaStyle
Monday, June 15, 2020
Sunday, June 14, 2020
Blinking Lights
I like the feel of this, the way it flows and the conclusion which I think we all already knew!!-Catriona Abrahams
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