Monday, June 29, 2020

Taking Sand Bath

Although I am not sure I am correctly reading the poem's implied back story (that is my fault, not the poem's), its sheer evocative power compensates for any misreading on my part. I really like the mystery provided by the evocation.-Starward

Saviour Was Sad

Beautiful lines..
First poem was
written for unborn you
in my turbulent life

Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

Saturday, June 27, 2020

Priest Writes On Wall

Never read anything so beautiful about pain dying... Good work sir...-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi

Thursday, June 25, 2020

Watching A Miracle

Beautiful lines...
Be strong to honor
the dignity of the human
patience in flames.

Lovely verse Satish ji...as always!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

Sunday, June 21, 2020

Leaves Are Changing Colors

Loved the lines :
Vestigial pain
was insulting. You always
feel a presence.- Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal

Saturday, June 20, 2020

Reciting The Fake Poem

you joined the bomb squad
of poems.

Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle 

Thursday, June 18, 2020

Reciting The Fake Poem

you joined the bomb squad of poems.
Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle

Going Insane

A smoke signal is all it needs.-Rini Markle

To perceive
And to be perceived
Are two faces of the same coin
Only difference is
One is visible
And the other is hidden.
Respecting each others word
Honours every human being
And looking good over bad
Always makes matter cool
Win or loss is not the matter
Just changing angle is needed
To work things better.

Very true Sir things go insane that way only.-Varsha M

Wednesday, June 17, 2020

The Earthen Death

For the most part, I read your poems but most of the times I’m not sure what they are about. :(
All I know is that some of them capture me. Thanks for sharing with us.-Everlasting

History Repeats

A bit confused on what it means. Is it about a vampire? I'm very curious to its meaning.-MantaStyle 

Sunday, June 14, 2020

Blinking Lights

I like the feel of this, the way it flows and the conclusion which I think we all already knew!!-Catriona Abrahams