Weird Enigma

Beautiful lines..
I will take hold of the night.
There was no referral
of lying truth.

Loved the poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Fading Sheen

The first two lines I just love. There's something about the way you worded them, almost tenderly.-Skyfire

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Tenacity

Stunning! Absolutely superb poem Satish ji!
Loved these lines..
The sand fills your
pockets. You start
licking the salt
jettisoned by violent waves.
Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Thoughts In Wind

"You wanted to givea name to
"You wanted to give
a name to my
unborn poem."

That is ageless, quotable material, in and of itself. But yet, to limit the value of the poem to that triplet of lines would be an remarkable undertaking of injustice towards the pen. :) This is, quite simply, special in a most lasting sense. The muse must be, as well.-lyrycsyntyme

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Sonorous Tones

What lovely lines...
The fake blooms. I will
never see the death
of a rose petal

Simply beautiful Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Old Instincts

Love it.-Trenz Pruca

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When Horizon Meets The Moon

I like the variety of phrases
I like the variety of phrases by which the poem proceeds to its conclusion; they are fresh, zesty, and---even one or two of them---highly unusual (in my opinion, at least). I applaud the beauty of this poem.-Starward

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Looking Around

reads like an elongated haiku, or a budding renga (it will make a good start for a fusion poem),
intuitive and free: like the nature it depicts-L. B. Mek

You paint such a vivid picture & add a calming atmosphere to a short & most enjoyable piece.-Unsub

I liked it.-Trenz Pruca

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Striving Hard

Very interesting lines Satish ji...
You
invoke the toddler god
who would kill king cobra
Thanks for sharing! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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One Moonless Night

wonderful image of the solitude that invades us at times, in those bleak hours of a troublesome night.-L. B. Mek

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When The Smoke Rises

I see myself in parts of this poem.
"As the smoke rises- she says goodbye to the naive girl she used to be. Again- she rises" .
Good write.-Laconic Meraki 

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What Was Not Said

Always love to read your beautiful poems Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines...
Golden keys in a ring,
hang down from your neck.
I am imprisoned again.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Some Royality?

beautiful.-MelissaJA

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Falling Debris

Splendid... beautifuly penned sir. :)-SHWETA VASHISHT, shahdara

Heart touching verse and beautifully penned lines...
Hanged from the roof
to understand the pangs of poverty.

Lovely poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

wonderfil poem sir.-Ramakant Puranik, Bangalore

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Unaging

I absolutely loved your work ..the questions you have raised and the thoughts you have provoked .We do loose our ways to find people sometimes , we do make bad choices even if we know we are making them and we do dissappear in the world some people create with a simple smile .
love-Ankita Dwivedi 

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