Unmatched

 'Let the traffic grow between

give and take. You can deceive
yourself by forgetting to
perceive the rainbow dreams.'
wow, brilliant lines.-L. B. Mek

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Repeat Dilemma

i love the ending. well played-eleven_eleven

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Small Pains

You Describe
USA polarity indirectly in your empty spinning minds. The monarch reading is brilliant.-allets

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My Things Your Things

Lovely lines Satish ji...
A dead hibiscus wakes up
in your hand.You fondle the denials
of pain of internal bleeds.

Loved the poem much!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal India

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amour propre

Many muses not yet written and still she steals a many voice and hearts with her beauty and cruelty (Mother nature)-matthew Bill

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Why Do I Suffer?

I can see this voice developing into a hate-love relationship a burning desire that needs a nice cool drink to quench that dry parched conflict.,Some great metaphors in conflict as is desire, love, and betrayal. -matthew Bill

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Enjoyed Wow, beautiful ending of a vibe I could feel right down to my soul.
Thanks for letting it go!-Poetic Dan

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Sitting In Fog

 Tell your loved ones that they didn’t die alone. A part of us is still with them.-Pooja Bhayana

well said..................vincent bhayana

intense emotions after one loses its life partner......vincent bhayana

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Between The Veils

 'Someone lives in your eyes unseen.',

indeed, so apparent and true when pointed out
yet, so seemingly impossible to identify - when searched for: on our own...
a wonderful write, Happy New Year dear Poet-L. B. Mek

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Meditating Again

your every poem is just sublime nectar of nirvana.-Dalton

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Hope Was Done

Beautiful lines...
Don't go my angel back
to your abode in deep sea.
Earth was burning. I am on fire

Thanks https://museindia.com/for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

Ignorance?

'when touched
by a moonbeam.' beautiful.-saiom

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Take Me In Arms

Beautiful expression...Paper-thin love carries Himalaya.
HAPPY NEW YEAR SATISH JI!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Repentance

Feathers carrying the wages of sins to fly after my lips taste.
So I will just let it go.-Amon

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Earthly Claims

indeed you might be my favorite poet. -Dalton

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Without Ceremony

'What a thrill -
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of hinge'
wrote Sylvia in her 'Cut'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
and your words too:
cut, straight through me at first read,
seeped - deep within at second read
and forced me to click that favourite icon on third read...
thanks for sharing your unquestionable talent dear Poet-L. B. Mek

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