Tuesday, January 26, 2021

New Blood

I love your imagery. -Tracy Windisch-Mason

An Equal - Armed Cross

to you, a mere throwaway scribble this may be,
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor's unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing-L. B. Mek

Monday, January 25, 2021

Hope And Despair

A thought inspiring write. Be well.-allets

Silver Age

Violence of muted dialogues..what a beautiful expression in these lines..
The violence of muted
dialogues tear the atmosphere of
unknown pains.
Lovely poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Sunday, January 24, 2021

The Flesh and Predators

Another deep, dark, love piece, feeling the voice's anguish. It's kind of like following a lost soul on his journey to a dark place! I hope the forbidden love sees the voice in a better light, other than hidden or forbidden. Only time will tell when discovering true love. It will be like stepping out of the darkness and into the light Oh, and then how the voice will sing!-Matthew Bill

Friday, January 22, 2021

Captive Clock

A pen with a lot of metaphors. Keeping time might be a little offbeat, and a little dark, so I’ll grab the good ones that agree with me. Keep on creating until The grim reaper sees me, you’ll see me. Stay Safe!-matthew Bill

What Was Untouchable?

Your writing definitely comes from your soul vs your mind. I also enjoy the flavor of your cultural heritage. Great Job!-Words of Wisdumb 

Wednesday, January 20, 2021

Magical Solution

I really love how you can express so much emotion in fewer words than most poets. And I love this verse.-Willys Watson 

Tuesday, January 19, 2021

Yourselves

If there's a chance of hope it's always worth taking.
I hope you are well.-Mr. Darcy

Are You There

The wheel being a symbolism of Earth - and the questioning of leaving your home. The way I interpret this is you're lonely and feeling like you're foreign/alien - like you don't belong so therefore you are lonely. It's as though you've written four poems and made them one - they're disconnected unless you look further into it - the way I see it - you seek to find peace in your religion - did you find it? Are you there?-stormingdance (Jessica)

Wild Reflections

Love the last stanza.-H. Elizabeth

Displacing The Milestones

Dark, ethereal, beautiful.
"when I was dispensing the
laughs amidst the grief
of hills"
I LOVE THIS LINE.-stormingdance (Jessica)

How To Say Love

Such beautiful and powerful expression Satish ji....
You were Agni.
Loved the poem much! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal India

Monday, January 18, 2021

You Were The Moon

I'm not really sure what to make of this, but I guess that would be the point. I like the deep meaning buried in obscurity. The last line is perfect =) Nice work!-Words of Wisdumb 

Sunday, January 17, 2021

Trekking

The poem is beautiful, overall, but that first stanza, and the imagery of the moons, is extremely powerful and striking; what a great lead in to the remaining lines!-Januarian