Tuesday, January 26, 2021
New Blood
I love your imagery. -Tracy Windisch-Mason
An Equal - Armed Cross
to you, a mere throwaway scribble this may be,
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor's unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing-L. B. Mek
to me: a write of majestic Poetry, with unflinchingly vivid details from a survivor's unfaltering song
of insightful self-commentary...
Brilliant!
thanks for sharing-L. B. Mek
Monday, January 25, 2021
Silver Age
Violence of muted dialogues..what a beautiful expression in these lines..
The violence of muted
dialogues tear the atmosphere of
unknown pains.
Lovely poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal
The violence of muted
dialogues tear the atmosphere of
unknown pains.
Lovely poem Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Sunday, January 24, 2021
The Flesh and Predators
Another deep, dark, love piece, feeling the voice's anguish. It's kind of like following a lost soul on his journey to a dark place! I hope the forbidden love sees the voice in a better light, other than hidden or forbidden. Only time will tell when discovering true love. It will be like stepping out of the darkness and into the light Oh, and then how the voice will sing!-Matthew Bill
Friday, January 22, 2021
Captive Clock
A pen with a lot of metaphors. Keeping time might be a little offbeat, and a little dark, so I’ll grab the good ones that agree with me. Keep on creating until The grim reaper sees me, you’ll see me. Stay Safe!-matthew Bill
What Was Untouchable?
Your writing definitely comes from your soul vs your mind. I also enjoy the flavor of your cultural heritage. Great Job!-Words of Wisdumb
Wednesday, January 20, 2021
Magical Solution
I really love how you can express so much emotion in fewer words than most poets. And I love this verse.-Willys Watson
Tuesday, January 19, 2021
Yourselves
Are You There
The wheel being a symbolism of Earth - and the questioning of leaving your home. The way I interpret this is you're lonely and feeling like you're foreign/alien - like you don't belong so therefore you are lonely. It's as though you've written four poems and made them one - they're disconnected unless you look further into it - the way I see it - you seek to find peace in your religion - did you find it? Are you there?-stormingdance (Jessica)
Displacing The Milestones
Dark, ethereal, beautiful.
"when I was dispensing the
laughs amidst the grief
of hills"
I LOVE THIS LINE.-stormingdance (Jessica)
"when I was dispensing the
laughs amidst the grief
of hills"
I LOVE THIS LINE.-stormingdance (Jessica)
How To Say Love
Such beautiful and powerful expression Satish ji....
You were Agni.
Loved the poem much! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal India
You were Agni.
Loved the poem much! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal India
Monday, January 18, 2021
You Were The Moon
I'm not really sure what to make of this, but I guess that would be the point. I like the deep meaning buried in obscurity. The last line is perfect =) Nice work!-Words of Wisdumb
Sunday, January 17, 2021
Trekking
The poem is beautiful, overall, but that first stanza, and the imagery of the moons, is extremely powerful and striking; what a great lead in to the remaining lines!-Januarian
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