Friday, February 19, 2021
Asking No Mercy
As always, you achieve so much in your preferred, condensed style of penning. It is the fleshy body, mostly, that cries for it's poverty. And the spirit/soul or mind, if you will that cheers for it's own wealth. But will power and perseverence only come from the latter's wealth, all while needed physical relief is brought on by the former. Woe to one whose perseverence is attached to the physical, for a mere earthquake can change all that in a moment, and tears will wash it away.-lyrycsyntyme
Terror In Air
haunting..
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination.-L. B. Mek
demonstrates such a gift for realism, painted - poetically graceful, within purposed words of vivid imagination.-L. B. Mek
Thursday, February 18, 2021
Drifting in Dust Storm
Beautiful poem, Satish. Thanks for sharing!-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark
Wednesday, February 17, 2021
Drifting In Dust Storm
indeed, a large part of loss is in acceptance..
while we strive to keep their memory's crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close-L. B. Mek
while we strive to keep their memory's crystallised - froze,
we must equally admit they are no longer fingertip - close-L. B. Mek
Saturday, February 13, 2021
The Celestial Affair
What an excellent poem so well written and deep, I absolutely loved it!-Louise Robello, USA
Via Negativa
Loved this particluar stanza...
When the life meets
death, I stand on no man's land
to find if any spark was left.
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
When the life meets
death, I stand on no man's land
to find if any spark was left.
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Thursday, February 11, 2021
Increasing Angst
Of the pieces that you've written which I've been lucky enough to read, this is amongst your best. The profound sequence of lines that you close with, I suspect, will prove quite memorable.-lyrycsyntyme
Wordless Meanings
Like this poem
;You love to dig
your own meaning.'
I see your exploring the boundaries of imagery
Cool stuff keep it up.-Samith Pich
;You love to dig
your own meaning.'
I see your exploring the boundaries of imagery
Cool stuff keep it up.-Samith Pich
Wednesday, February 10, 2021
After The Eyebath
A very enjoyable read Satish , Best Wishes.-Edwin Jepson, UK
Fugitive
A theme in the realm of Poe. I greatly appreciate that. I recently learned about the woodpecker having a great affinity for acorns, which has quickly proved useful in understanding the reference here.-lyrycsyntyme
Tuesday, February 9, 2021
Poems Knock
Such a beautiful expression...
Death brings the live pain
of fossilized to-morrows
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Death brings the live pain
of fossilized to-morrows
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
Thursday, February 4, 2021
Without Eye Contact
Dark, Creepy, somewhat shocking, occult like! Hopping you move out of the dark and into the light. Sometimes you have to walk in the dark to move to the light! kanwas- Matthew Bill, USA
Saturday, January 30, 2021
For Eternal Kiss
beautiful!-L. B. Mek
As for love it sometimes drives a hard bargain, I like how your voice used nature as an incentive to lure or entice the love interest to the voice. A strong ending “nothing else” but I don’t believe it! I think the voice is just getting started. enjoyed!-Matthew Bill, USA
Wednesday, January 27, 2021
I Want Answers
Simply beautiful...
The humble
blood seeks truth from falling walls
What an expression Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
The humble
blood seeks truth from falling walls
What an expression Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal
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