Love Me Again

Satish, the sun is always chasing after the moon for the pranks she plays on him. Once in a while, the moon will blot out the sun just to run and hide from him again. I’ve always seen the sun as a he, and the moon as she, and this could be why man sees the moon as romantic and the sun as unforgiving. Love on the other hand is as shaky as this history. You can't have one without the other, and both will nurture the earth and its inhabitants just like good parents.-Matthew Bill, USA

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Brooding Over You

I like be the description in this poem. The first two really caught my attention.-Poetic Beauty

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Nursing Our Hurts

I must say, now I can grasp your lines Dr Satish. Undoubtedly, your journey of witnessing so many years hasn't gone futile. This poem describes my mindset so very accurately. Never wanting to become a devil just because our Creator made us go through tests for our good. Yes diamond cuts diamond but violence only creates violence. It's a beautiful morning read for me.-Tahsin (Taah-scene)

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Mesmerized

“Wrapped up, I give
you my heart, still throbbing
without the rib cage.“

You take the most cliche, most used imagery and turn it with your magic into a captivating, original line.-nourayasmine

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Mode Of Dying

You. write. like. no. other.
I don’t even need to know what you mean, what I get from each one of your writings is a hella lotta meaning.-nourayasmine

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Pure Mundanity

Yes, I know. We all are.-nourayasmine

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Sorting Out

To me this sounds like a love that is fading, people becoming distant with each other.-Poetic Beauty

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I Was Your Destiny

that graduation of age
brown-mark tagging, shrivelled opportunity
upon once pudgy, squeezy cheeks
of untameable beginning's, to all of potential'
far too quick: we blink...-L. B. Mek

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Out of Fire

Hej, Satish, thanks for the images in your poem. I have to pause and find out what you mean. Beautifully written.-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark

Satish, you have left me in deep thought and in a sad mood. With one high note, one match struck many times looking for the meaning of your sorrow, of a burnt-out passion. Peace be with you!-Matthew Bill, USA

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Lioness In Cloak

Beautiful expression...tears in tones
Your slanting eyes
will not drop the legacy of giving
away. It brings tears in stones.

Lovely poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Felled Over Yourself

lovely piece, sir-Ujjal Mandal, Ganguria

Lovely lines...
Pain was not responding
to music of night songbird

Beautiful as always Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Acid Test

What a long strange “trip it’s been” a line in a song by the Grateful Dead.-Poetic Beauty

Once again SV, wonderful imagery; surreal mystery.-John Cardwell

Hello, Satish! :)
I think I sort of get a meaning to this, but I'm not sure, it turned at section four.
I really liked the line - "you snatch away the echoes."
Thanks for sharing.-mattavelli

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Is it togetherness?

Beautiful.-rebmasters

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Don't Remember Me

 Lovely lines...

No outsider will witness
the fire of Ganges.

Beautiul poem Satish ji.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Infatuation

'Necrosis of old arches
follows the juvenile genius'..
such a targeted use of purposed imagery, clinical in its delivery and meaningful in its brevity
a great read.-L. B. Mek

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