Golden Cut

Letters kept that will never be sent. There is a sadness and longing in this poem. The imagery is amazing.-Poetic Beauty

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The Another Tale

Brilliant!
Guru!
As-ever: I humbly thank you, for choosing to share.-L. B. Mek

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Indigenously

A fantastic work. Pupils should study this as a flawless poem.-ddavidd

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No Dues

This is very and excellently Kafkaesque.-BOB GALLO

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CELIBATE PAIN

Lovely expression...
Transition always
hurts.

It is very true that transition always disturbs the comfort zone that has been existing for long.
Lovley poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Dimpled Pains

great Title!
thanks for sharing-L. B. Mek

Interesting .2nd verse-rosiedm

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Home Of Truths

Beautiful poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Midnight Happening

I found this in the early hours when I couldn't sleep.
So so pleased I did, the imagery is amazing and it really captured my mood at that time.
That's the weird thing about poems for me. Depending where my head is at the time will influence my love of a poem.-CJ Maleney

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The Little Was Big

'Not dependent on poverty
of truth, time
leaves the green amputation
on the: heart.'
stupendously, profound!-L. B. Mek

I appreciate your little poems... they are dense, full of surprises, and hard enough to decipher to be elusive, but rewarding to work through.
Do you have a name for the 3X3 verse form you use? What made you pick that style? Reminds me a little of Dante. It's very limiting in a way that keeps you efficient and direct. You have but a few lines to say your piece, so you have to make it succinct and bold.
I read your poems like little riddles. They are becoming like my daily sudoku!-jarcher54

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Long Threads

I love the images your verse paints as words. The aches we sometimes feel are caused by ourselves, sometimes by others. As we become older, wiser we will learn from them and hopefully move on with our lives.-Willys Watson

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The Image Catcher

Ohhh, wonderful.... "O round moon and the sun, Our earth is breaking. All night It was raining on the flames." Powerful, thank you for sharing!-Myrna Martin, USA

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The Massive Glory

so deep, even excavated line by line
this worded fountain of insightful wisdom
shan't ever be unfurled in its entirety,
testimony to how you've tamed
such a wide ranging, yet focused - study
with practised skill of brevity and conveyed sincerity
whilst managing to deliver, such acute commentary.-L. B. Mek

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Flying In Vacuum

So much In that ? Reminds me of something from native American channeling thank you!-5winds

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The River Between Us

The last stanzas sums up this poem quite well. We have to be careful the paths we decide to take.-Poetic Beauty

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Inauthentically?

Intriguing::
"don't want to be separated
from my half-eaten moon."
"Hallucinatory- be seduced for the sake of fashion."
"In anguish I watch
the terror was becoming a religion."
"Someone commands me?
to sacrifice my pen."

it seem the question mrak in last quote is a glitch. -BOB GALLO

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