Tuesday, May 18, 2021

Litany For None

Terrific poem. Thank you. I reread it several times exploring its layers.-Trenz Pruca

more bleak, in tone dear Guru
but no less profound in its Poetic brevity
so acutely you've worded, these layers of insight
like Trenz Pruca commented, it needs to be read
a few times, just to identify the signposts
to its meaningful, worth..
thanks for sharing.-L. B. Mek

Sunday, May 16, 2021

Hope Was Given Up

Very powerful words and imagery, Satish jee! I loved the line, "The winter pain brings false wounds hurled by velvety words"! A beautiful poem that depicts real happiness in life.-Padma

Friday, May 14, 2021

No Poison Between Us

how sad, when we let others infiltrate and poison
our relationship
with that avenue for solace and self-expression
we painstakingly, excavated
for ourselves:
from ourselves...-L. B. Mek

After The Bruises

 Simply superb! I enjoyed this one very much!-Sarah Cristobal


Thursday, May 13, 2021

Golden Cut

Letters kept that will never be sent. There is a sadness and longing in this poem. The imagery is amazing.-Poetic Beauty

Tuesday, May 11, 2021

The Another Tale

Brilliant!
Guru!
As-ever: I humbly thank you, for choosing to share.-L. B. Mek

Indigenously

A fantastic work. Pupils should study this as a flawless poem.-ddavidd

Monday, May 10, 2021

Sunday, May 9, 2021

CELIBATE PAIN

Lovely expression...
Transition always
hurts.

It is very true that transition always disturbs the comfort zone that has been existing for long.
Lovley poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Friday, May 7, 2021

Wednesday, May 5, 2021

Midnight Happening

I found this in the early hours when I couldn't sleep.
So so pleased I did, the imagery is amazing and it really captured my mood at that time.
That's the weird thing about poems for me. Depending where my head is at the time will influence my love of a poem.-CJ Maleney

The Little Was Big

'Not dependent on poverty
of truth, time
leaves the green amputation
on the: heart.'
stupendously, profound!-L. B. Mek

I appreciate your little poems... they are dense, full of surprises, and hard enough to decipher to be elusive, but rewarding to work through.
Do you have a name for the 3X3 verse form you use? What made you pick that style? Reminds me a little of Dante. It's very limiting in a way that keeps you efficient and direct. You have but a few lines to say your piece, so you have to make it succinct and bold.
I read your poems like little riddles. They are becoming like my daily sudoku!-jarcher54

Monday, May 3, 2021

Long Threads

I love the images your verse paints as words. The aches we sometimes feel are caused by ourselves, sometimes by others. As we become older, wiser we will learn from them and hopefully move on with our lives.-Willys Watson

Saturday, May 1, 2021

The Image Catcher

Ohhh, wonderful.... "O round moon and the sun, Our earth is breaking. All night It was raining on the flames." Powerful, thank you for sharing!-Myrna Martin, USA