The Last Battle

The pain of someone's heart due to the absence of a loved one is beautifully depicted, Satish jee.-Padma

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Golden Birds Are Falling

'The silver barge cannot stand
in the cyclone-unheard..Collect the
handsome corpses of them who wanted to live.'
wonderfully impactive, finale
such a sobering read
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Were You A Maneater?

Enjoyed your poem Satish. Thank you. Alan Brown, UK

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Unreturning

This reminds me of someone who has lost a loved one and they still have conversations with that person; where they once sat.-Poetic Beauty

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Return Of Light

Words can do harm and they can do good. The description in this poem are done very creatively.-Poetic Beauty

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Walk A While

Your eyes play with flying
sparks from the fireworks of the lips.
This is the best line of all which gives a deep meaning, Satish jee. A good poem, indeed!-Padma

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How to say salaam?

from Muse, by Anna Akhmatova
What just means liberty, or youth, or approbation,
When compared with the gentle piper's tread?

And she came in, threw out the mantle's edges,
Declined to me with a sincere heed.
I say to her, "Did you dictate the Pages
Of Hell to Dante?"
(and so, I too ask you: Guru
Do you dictate, your Visionary pages
akin to Grecian Oracle: truth's...?)-L. B. Mek

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Very well written enjoyed it very much. Thank you. Alan Brown, UK

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No Prophet Speaks

Incredible! I valued your expression and way of revealing truth. A tender unique way to say much more with less. To notice the disharmony while maintaining heart wholeness. Not with anger. You powerfully send a clear message with your words. Also instilling even more power from your uncorrupted standpoint within your being.-Danielle

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Lifting The Dead

Too cruel to be born again.
Life challenges the rising pain.
These lines tell me how painful and challenging life is! An insightful poem, Satish jee.-Padma

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A Bone Quits

Amen!
you're digging the Ruins
of cloud-bricked Empire, now
the mere sands of our shoreline, afterthought's
you're searching for ideological Deity's
imbued, with Morality's wafer-thin bedrocks
now belittled, to a mere fragment
of our despairingly cyclical: dreamless reality..
'antiquities: to be, or not - to be...'
warped
in-to modernity's:
to believe, or
nihilistically: yearn-for - endlessly...!'
(profoundly insightful
as-ever: Guru
thank you)-L. B. Mek

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The Voyager

Think True
You are a Masterpiece Incarnate!-Pungus

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Email from Padmavathi, Museindia.com

Commendations!
I'm delighted to congratulate you and announce that you're the winner in Editor's Pick - July 2021. I always feel happy and curious to read your evocative writings. I wish you all the very best in your endeavours that would make you successful.
Best Wishes and Regards
Padmavathi, Editor, Your Space, Muse India.

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Living In A Cave

A good poem that depicts the truth, bitter feelings, and the ultimate meaning of life, Satish jee.-
Padma

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Euphoria

Hi Satish, I found this very interesting and have read it a few times to feel your poem. Good work.-carol wiseman

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Tormenting Dreams

'The collected suicide
of the nightingales have given the worry.'
'my poems are
working crossing the pains.'
'The tulips have started
talking. Why the blood spots are appearing?'
'Humankind is becoming
rare.'
(sheer Brilliance, as ever: Guru
please forgive my rude rearranging
of your masterly lines)-L. B. Mek

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