Trampled Dreams

This conveys emotions I can't really pin down. I like it a lot. Thank you-C E Thomas

profound words, that express
such raw incredulity, at the sheer
diabolic status, of our society's morally bankrupt hypocrisy..
a great write!
thank you, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Rain Mind

So beautifully and poetically expressed! It gave me the feeling of falling in love, with the euphoria of breathing deeply to smell the jasmine. You've captured something wonderful here, Satish!-Kelly Scheppers

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God, What is Your Real Name

Not heartless yet.
It goes straight to the soul, like a prayer. 🙏🏻🌹 Thank you for sharing! I also hope the shadows fall away.-mdelleviolette

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Light Luggage

'Ah, the terror
to remain alive, under
the water of mercy.'
just pure poetic genius!
thank you, Guru.-L. B. Mek

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Trying To Remember

beautiful prose.-sophin

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Holy Tree Crying Earth

A gorgeous poem! Lingering is certainly a struggle in these times. What DOES one suggest to turn the tides and refill the ocean of love? Is it possible at all, anymore?-mdelleviolette

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We Don't Agree

Loved the poem m, the play of words, the metaphors.-Unnikrishnan E S

"The cult violence…destroy the pistillate.." A forceful expression against female foeticide, which continues as a serious evil. But the poem is much more profound than that.-Unnikrishnan E S

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Not A Punishment

Incredible write. I can't put into words how I adored this work.-sophin

'The wild pursuit
of your footprints brings bliss.

Fight was on, for not
to be or isness. I cannot
turn away from my
inner voice,'
(great wordplay and effortless flow
a brilliant read, thanks for sharing)-L. B. Mek

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Two Small Eyes

I loved the line when you 'you can't change the world' and it's so true, Satish jee. A good poem.-Padma, Hyderabad

Interesting!-Kuma Raj Subedi , South Australia

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Caretaking

Brilliant!
(and Happy New Year!)-L. B. Mek

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I Write Blood

Facts well told, Satish jee. A good poem.-Padma, Hyderabad

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I See in Dark

Trying to bring positivity in negative thoughts is something commendable and you depicted this so well in this poem, Satish jee.-Padma, Hyderabad

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On The Longest Day

Hits me as a protest against climate change—that is, we must learn to move forward from the errors of our past in order to prevent global deterioration.-Victor Ambiguo

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Deceiving None

this is a perfect poem.. thank you Satish.-Dale Costello, Australia

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No Mercy Today

This is something reminding God to do justice through this poem. Nice thought and well-expressed, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

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