Tarapada Mohapatra

STRANGE RELATIONSHIP
Great reading...quite intriguing
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goldy_99

NO KNOCKS WILL COME
It is good! I like it.

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rizalbob

THE GUESTS HAVE ARRIVED
Beautifully written. Well done.


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rizalbob

ON DUST I SIT FRIGHTENED
Yes indeed, where are we heading - with all the human sufferings, senseless killings and wars?


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Goldy Locks

PATH OF DESTINY
Stellar: words, imagery. non-truth/false beacon ~ flaunt its devious exposure.

best care, sjg

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izzipoetry, sylvie

DEATH IS NOT A CEREMONY

izzipoetry

Deep and very powerful.""Slowly, dark breast of night will feed the moon' tell me more about thess lines.

sylvie

The inner workings of the mind are a mystery in a way. We are forever searching for the meanings of life, for the why of things, for the knowledge that will set us free. This is thought provoking, and has a lot of depth.

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sylvie

CANNOT FIND THE DOOR
Thought provoking ... again your inagery is so creative. Life can bem a hard judge ... great write.

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sylvie

O GOD ARE YOU LISTENING?
I can really feel the strong emotions within these lines. Great rhythm and imagery brings this to life.

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Louie Limosani

VOYAGE
Good work here, like the images in this poem.

Cheers
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Amita Singh

MISSING PORTRAIT
Wow, very capturing lines to describe the wrong the not so good things of life

My fingers are burnt, my poem bleeds
give me some water, some real cool.
Lake is on fire, god is on run.
Clouds are empty and sun is an abstract.
Frame is broken, portrait missing.
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Earthborn

Message from Earthborn

going through your work. Amazing. I really need to concentrate on the totality. Amazing!

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Goldy Locks

WAYWARD SON
what description. what power. Nothing wayward about your poems. They are direct, wise, and billowing with awesome substance.
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Goldy Locks

FEAR
you proceed logically and scientifically. with your thoughts, yes? But there's always a level of intuitiveness. Where your insight rests.

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Goldy Locks

EUTHANASIA
too much Nip/tuck?

The debt of ashes
was climbing up.
Clouds outside,
clouds inside. .. .. ... ....nice.

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Goldy Locks

WAKING UP
Malibu is up in flames. Denver is getting snow. Crazy/mixed-up world. Insomnia feeds that [notion/delusion] with its removal from reality.

Heart will toss the words in silence
and I will lit the blue flame in stillness. .. ... . .. . . ... . enjoyed, sjg
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