Josh Silvers

DEATH AND DUST
nice verbage and good poem
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Liddie22

REVOCATION
Beautifully said. We all vow to challenge tradition in our youth only to retun to it for comfort as we test our strength over time and then forget the great call of endless possibilities audible mostly to youthful ears. Great write. Liddie

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Zelgin Yorae

WHAT ENDING?
Not bad, I feel that the ending is never near, that the separate stories end, yet stories continue when others end. This is the reality of living creatures.

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Patrick McFarland

SUICIDES
Sad and moving. I have heard it said that to be a great poet, one must know great pain. I feel sad because you are truly a great poet.
Peace.

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Roger Cornish

HOLDING MY TOES
When I read poetry like this it illustrates how far I have, Poetically, to travel.
So, I'll make up some sandwiches and get on my way.... and if I get even close to your writing, then I will be thrilled!
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Patrick McFarland

DESERTED WASTELAND
Wonderful and moving and wise and tranquil all at once. What a great great poem.
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Sunil Uniyal

ASHES OF HATE
A beautiful poem, Sir, thought provoking.

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Melvin Banggollay

CATCH THE SUNSET
I love this piece so much as it poetically display the magic of your pen and wit of your mind.

thanks and best wishes,

melvin
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Melvin Banggollay

IN THE INTERMITTENT LOVE
very nice poem. I like its deepness and content.

best wishes,

melvin

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expression

Messeage from expression

I have been reading your work. It is very deep and profound so much so that I am unable to comment on it. Please excuse me for it. Some of your verses are beyond my understanding too.

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rajagopal haran

EMPTINESS WAS SCREAMING
Loving can cost a lot but not loving always costs more, and those who fear to love often find that want of love is an emptiness that robs the joy from life.-great poem sir; enjoyed it


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Mystery

BLEEDING HEART
I really like ""Do not wake me up I am sleepwalking in the courtyard of the muse"". It is easier to spend time in the land of fantasy and inspiration than to walk through the anguish of the world. Nicely done!

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Subbaraman N V

FACE OF TRUTH
Seeing the face of truth is always a great exercise! Happy thet you could see the face in the course of a night! Congarats! A good poem!

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Subbaraman N V

FAILING GOD
'Seeking my own truth, I abandon the path and fall upon lies'! And there lies the problem and attendent difficulties!

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Subbaraman N V

FAITHLESS AUTUMN
Life of an ordinary mortal is well portrayed! Good poem, nice thoughts, great presentation!
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