Thys, South Africa

SIGNIFICANT

Satish Verma: Man has a spiritual sharing with god. A part of him is there in human.

Thys, South Africa: I hear what you are saying, and if I understand you correctly, that type of talk could be seen as blasphemous; by the doctrine of my youth... But, I am not a yound man anymore; and have learned much about the fables we have been told as children and how removed it appears to be from what could be truth.

From my own estimation and conclusions; I gather that Someone as Great as God, must somehow encompass all. Therefore, like man; God must know good and bad, have a freewill to choose between the two; and in order to be seen as All Good, have a great "track record" and integrity in choosing good... my estimation is, that He has always chosen good. That would make Him a Good God, across all dynamics, know and unknown, not?

What do I; we know? Not much, and most of our convictions, based on either stories or own estimation. Need I say more?

Love Always,

Thys

Satish Verma: My earlier comment was a bit understated. Creation is part of creator. The soul of man is fractional essence of a big soul our God. So God lives in every being.


Thys, South Africa: I am much comfortable with it being said that way.:) Thanks you kindly for a very valuable comment.

Peace for you my friend.
Love
Thys

lillyjane

UBIQUITOUS
Depression is an awful feeling I can relate to that as I have felt that way, a brilliant poem that really explains the feelings xx

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Earthborn

SCRIPT
Wow! Excellent command of langusge. Imagery great. Love the finality of:put away your swords!

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Earthborn

STORM AND GALE
the mystery of the elements can never be fathomed by Man. We can however relate to it. Your perspective in this poem is awesome.

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Earthborn

SUN WILL HIDE
Hmmm! The morbidity again. Fear, Sorrow, confusion and Treachery. Can we ever escape?

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ychinesepoem

I like the beautiful sentences and the artistic thought of the poem.
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Rajagopal Haran

FOUNTAIN
They keep telling us that in war truth is the first casualty, which is nonsense since it implies that in times of peace truth stays out of the sick bay or the graveyard.......
wonderful write sir; ...

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Mary Gordley

LIKE A FIREBIRD
Wonderful poem the words have fire of their own.

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unknown Viper

GREEN EYES
a poem to ponder...
violence begets violence...a never-ending process
can we bring about change without violence? ...i wish

i like your poems...


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ychinesepoem

VALLEY OF TEARS
In silence,to feel the muse .I like ""it is a lone journey, where centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts""most.

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Genevieve

O GOD ARE YOU LISTENING?
God is everywhere, always awake, never sleeps to watch over us. He knows our fears and cries when His people get astray. I know HE IS LISTENING! Wonderful write!

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rizalbob

CONTRAST
rizalbob
I'm thick-headed. Can't place what you are trying to convey. Why do poets talk in vieled speeches and make readers guess what they are trying to say?

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Is it veiled or disturbing you? Some thing is left unsaid. It shakes you to think. One world or a sentence keeps on haunting. I am not talking about myself bot of good poetry. Whole humanity is passing through a convulsive phase. We have to find the truth ruthelessly. Poem reflects the agony of uncertainty. What is the compulsion to say something? I think I am able to tell my view point.



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ychinesepoem

I SEE MY OWN DEMISE
What fine poems! I'd like to read them. Share your beautiful words and beautiful stories with us, then dread has no time to bother you.

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mintchocol8chick

DEAD FAITH
Your use of metaphor is other-worldly. The comparisons you draw are very imaginative (for example, ""the old silence becomes teeth of a dead faith"") and powerful. I enjoy your poems.
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mintchocol8chick

SATURN WILL SHORTLY RISE
This is kind of bizarre and very wonderful.
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