Sunday, November 29, 2009

Anjali Sinha

* YES
an eye opener
good write
-10 anjali


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Ency Bearis

NAKED FREEDOM (A sequel to the massacre of 23rd Nov 09 in Philippines)
Thanks for your nice concern to the tragedy in the Philippines...my native country...a horrible thing due to too much politics or the power of dynasty...but pity to the innocents....a moving poem...

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Saturday, November 28, 2009

Meggie Gultiano

NAKED FREEDOM (A sequel to the massacre of 23rd Nov 09 in Philippines)
Indeed our hearts bleeds to those innocent people who were included in that bloody day.
What kind of a person/persons are they?
I come from that place, (Mindanao) , and we cry for justice.
A touching write.

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Friday, November 27, 2009

Christopher Rollason

The selected poems of Satish Verma, under the title of BEYONDS & BETWEON, are already an impressive product of intercultural dialogue. Satish Verma, an Indian poet and Hindi native speaker here writing in English, traces a dark journey through a landscape not of this world - a burnt, stunted, desiccated inner landscape that in many ways recalls T.S. Eliot's Waste Land - and yet at the end, in a movement reminiscent of the Tagore of Gitanjali, welcomes the arrival of a transformative Guest, in an eminently Indian fashion. Christopher Rollason

Jandi

SHADOWS
They were playing hide and seek ... Fidelity of course was the decision of both ... Attitude divided the bed and kitchen That is what happens. I like the combination of words,its so beautiful.

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lullaby

SYMBIOSIS
A metaphoric and interesting poem; I love the title and the lines ""Pure chemistry of love is boiling."" and ""Poetry is waiting for symbiosis.""
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adeagiri

CANNOT OPEN THE LOOP
Speech does not bring solace mathematics cannot open the loop. How true. Find the inner peace. Great work. Profound.
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Buchi

UNREPLIED
i read this poem and read it again,i feel like i was spoken to. the stand i ought to take but didn't,the truth swallowed to let in injustice. the camouflag of human existaence,if the eye averts to face the just,deception lurks around. it is a GREAT write.
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Jandi

STUFFED SILENCE
""Everseeking a revolution, brain will find a false excuse. The archives do not give a clue""... i like that line You have done it again!
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Lombe

SLASHED WOUND
Its captivating, wonderfuly sad and filled with regret.
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Wordsculptor

FAILED GOD
This has a sadness about it. The idea of 'abandonment' is not one my theology can readily accept. It is however a refreshingly thought provoking piece of writing. From a purely visual persective I'd separate this into two lines: 'A crystal depth spills in cosmos, the words scream'
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jackreed3

DECAYED CENTURY
Your poem is very well writen.. I read it twice and veiwed it in many different ways.. I really injoyed it... Your friend in poetry... jackreed3
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Lombe

MAN?S DESTINY
Nice and grim. Well writen
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Angeldeath

WAKING UP
Nightmares are horrible. I couldnt imagaine that kind of horror that haunts you. Everyone has dreams and nightmares... few surpass this. Powerful work.
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Angeldeath

EUTHANASIA
This one confused me abit, but i enjoyed it. Espically ""Death was another name of birth ?"" that was great.

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