DARK LANGUAGE

Your poetry touches something inside my soul, no matter how horrific or dark it is.-Sara Lokken

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DEAF AND DUMB

This is "I was dreaming of only bleeders"- this is you, what you're doing, and your words certainly haven't lost any edge at all. You are brutally honest. I don't know how to describe what I'm getting in your metaphors, but I share in your grief.-Sara Lokken

I love the Tut and tutenkhamen reference.... Good one here Verma.....-Jared Pickett

strange poem, moving in a horrific way.-Doris Culverhouse

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* THIS MOMENT

This almost sounds like human trafficking. Heartbreaking... horrific.... dead... is what I am getting. Yes, I keep changing my name, because I can't make up my mind.:) I'll leave it with the old one. I'll go comment on some more work. Sincerely,-Sara Lokken

so sad-Susan Palli

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CROSSBARS

NO ONE! So, Satish, make them stop if you can! I guess it is up to the Heavenly beings. Many men seem to have lost touch. Great thought provoking write. Keep writing. Smiles, -Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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OUTRAGEOUS

person empty. But precious is the heart of the faithful. And forgiving oneself is often harder than forgiving another...because we know! But happiness is based upon righteous living and forgiving ourselves along with others. Our Creator wants us to be righteously happy. He forgives those who ask. Be happy. Lovingly,-Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Satish. Love, -Carol Brown

Nice Verma.... Keep them comin'.....:-Jared Pickett

Interesting write Satish and luv your title too ... thought provoking .. thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.. -Linda-Marie Bariana

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DIVINITY WITHOUT

I feel I am crying with you. This is so hollow... -Sara Lokken

Very interesting writing today Satish. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love,-Carol Brown

Wow, quite the image you have here my friend... Excellent word-play... Good work....:-Jared Pickett

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MINACIA

You are standing back from something, painfully.... -Sara Lokken

You have excellent use of words that create imagery and and thoughtful responses from a reader. Excellent, Satish. Smiles, -Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

WOW... Intense poem... Good job my friend....-Jared Pickett

What is Minacia? This is very intriguing if not a little unsettling. It reminds me of a Plath Poem. Milk for the soldiers? It's too deep for me. -deneith reif

IMMOVABLE

Satish your poems like prayers amplify all of us longing for peace. Your bold images cut me to the core and I stop in my tracks and whisper a prayer for our world. -Marcia Schechinger, USA

Crossing the time zone

Dear Vermaji. Kudos to your poetic prowess that is very unique in all your writings. Sadly some portions I could not decipher in this poem. They are a bit complicated with some deeper meaning. I could only make out some as I rewrote one to form my own impressions. And here I shall reproduce the same, though it is a bit crass. I only await your comments correcting my version and further elucidating your poem. - Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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OUTRAGEOUS

What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Satish. Love, - Carol Brown


Nice Verma.... Keep them comin'.....:- ared Pickett


Interesting write Satish and luv your title too ... thought provoking .. thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..- Linda-Marie Bariana


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FOR A FORGOTTON STORY

The world is destroying itself and people don't care. It is good of you Satish to make us remember our responsibilities. Well-written.- Jacinta Ramayah, Malaysia


Satish with graphic reality you express the need for change. Change in government procedures, change in person, and change in prayers that God will lead those in power from corruption and proceed with more compassionate hearts. Last stanza - a real power punch. :)- Marcia Schechinger,  USA


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Moon rise

Respected Sir, A beautiful piece of poetry. Liked it much. Warm regards, - Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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MINACIA

WOW... Intense poem... Good job my friend....:JP]- Jared Pickett


What is Minacia? This is very intriguing if not a little unsettling. It reminds me of a Plath Poem. Milk for the soldiers? It's too deep for me. - deneith reif


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FLAME

Satish, I know about inheriting "the depth of a problem", but life is not over and who knows when the "flame" will ignite. May we all find that place of peace in our lives. :) - Marcia Schechinger, USA


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IRONY OF AUTHOR

Excellent write Satish... Keep em comin my friend....:JP]- Jared Pickett


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