SUN’S INHERITANCE

Very nicely put Satish,
I have also tributes a short poem to people, who thinks by killing and exploding innocent people on the street, the will go to heaven to have a heavenly life!- Dean 

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FREAKING OUT

this one feels a little disjointed... not up to your usual standard, Satish-Roger Wayne Eberle

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IN SELFISH VEIN

Only the author knows of his thinking, yet in metaphorical language it is rather powerful.
Death of one way to bring new life.-Andy Turner

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UNJOINTED

I especially like the 3rd and 4th stanzas Satish. Was it stupid to hope or tend one thing more than the other? We know not what the future holds. - Janna Hill

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EVERLASTING

EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE...WE 'RETRACE THE PATHS' OF WHAT HAS...OR...COULD HAVE BEEN. WE RETRACE 'DEAD THINGS'. THANK GOD FOR THE WISDOM TO QUICKLY 'CLOSE THE DOOR' AND MOVE AHEAD ON OUR JOURNEYS TO...'E- Joyce Bell

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ANTIMATTER

A very peaceful poem indeed. Enjoyed it. Cheers- Chibuzor Ikemenogo, Nigeria

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DECAYED CENTURY

Satish an emormously moving poem of the day the earth bowed in silence! Innocence was driven into a pile of rubble when the towers fell, I still remain speechless as the memories of those lost come to mind. Again, with you, I beg for Peace.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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MOMENT OF TRUTH

ur lines 'conflict btw doubt and inherited faith' are quite interestin.- S.zaynub Kamoonpuri, Tanzania

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THE KISS ……………….

Satish as always a privilege to read your work, the metaphors with such contrast that take the reader to the innocent and the guilty and their "marriage" in war. The Holocaustal and all victims of any war who only smell the incense of fire over "rain". Your "songs" of peace will be forever heard and remembered as you continue in your work for peace and truth. Thank you Satish.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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SUSPENDED EXECUTION

Oh Satish this was timely thot...i recently had an experience where it was painful to realize ..your loved ones or siblings or reveredones have grown smaller in their minds...so well composed..thanks for sharing...and bless you...- Rita Singh, India

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SOME QUESTION MARKS

Satish thoughts to be considered after the facts. Sad so many were lost to "haloed tombstone", before they were executed without any source of savior. I read your work and think of the Holocaust and can not fathom how such tragedy could have taken place, and how can 'sick men' get such followings -- many "question marks" in the waste of a human life. Always an honor to read your work Satish, thank you.-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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*Return Journey

You summarize the tale well, death as an arresting image stand out here.- Snehith Kumbla, Pune

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DRIFT ICE

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INVERTED

to a river of tears........... a painful truth.-seema chowdhury


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Death Of A Godman

A really great poem i really really like this one.
Good write.
May i invite you to read my new poem
called back in time.- Dave Walker

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