GIFTED DEATH

great write! enjoyed the read!-  Lori Lucas McClure

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THE SOCRATIC EXISTENCE

Socrates was a philosopher who loved to 'interact with people' and teach them how to think, till his cup of hemlock spilled ! I had covered him in my Story of Ancient Philosophy in Verse! Thanks, - RAJ NANDY

Hi Satish, I enjoyed the poem, the truth is not defiled just covered and hard to see sometimes.-  David Taylor

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UNMADE FUTURE

this was a great piece of writing... excellent work.-  Naeem

That is a very definitive account of what is not definite- Deep

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SPLITTING

tight work.-  sstoth0

Magnificent. I love this.-   PegasusWhiteRose

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HOISTING

"a fledged reincarnation" -- great opening and the rest very descriptive -  Lady Dragonwyck

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NEW YEARS MIRROR

dont laugh too loud you will wake the neighbours,lol,nice write Satish-  RICHARD PALMER

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REVELATION

singing in the inner mind ,your songs resonate,, peace-  leafsailor

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UNASKED

good to hear your solid voice yes I understand the" you" in this dogs will lead them home-  leafsailor

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ONCE UPON

Sir, thank you for entering one of your awesome writes in Topic of the Week. -  Lady Dragonwyck 

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GOING NOWHERE

Morning, Sir. Very insightful write. Your usual incredible insight.
Happy Monday............- Lady Dragonwyck 

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UNBORN

This is beautiful. Lucid, simple, enigmatic, suggestive, emotional.
Thank you.- PegasusWhiteRose

And terrifying...!-   PegasusWhiteRose

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COUNTING

Much to consider in your poem...tfs-  LightH2O

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WAVERING

As usual you present the deepness of spirit in such captivating lines as "the past will question the future & the anguish of infinity" which leave me mesmerized.-  LightH2O

Thoughtful . . , with clear expressions,-  Dulen gogoi

Melancholic sentiments but bear truth!a- marvinbrato

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IT OPENS

Deep and piecing to the core.-  LightH2O

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HALLUCINATION

That last stanza is so sad.-  LightH2O

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