BODHISATTAVA

This last stanza is deeply touching. A spirit of light longing for light and perfection in this trialing grown we call Earth.-  LightH2O

Namaste` my friend-  Pamela Fielder Nixon

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Spinning

It's like the world is spinning out of control. I enjoyed this poem on the state of our world-  Andrea Dietrich 

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Empty mind

Interesting points made in this poem.
Good write.-  Captain Cur

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SONG OF THE LAST SIREN

this is a wise poem and absolutely a reality . thought provoking logic. thanks for sharing such an amazing poem. God Bless you Dear !-  Sajna Kailas

I'm blown away. I can definitely share a reality with how you feel about this. Beautiful description.-  InfinitysAffinity

"...my hands burn. Very disquietening! First stanza very revealing, and heart felt. "come hither my child of sorrow" "... to maintain fidelity towards verses of sadness..." I feel your words of current and ancient wisdom.- LightH2O
Deep and Powerful! An extraordinary piece that deserves to be read a second time to fully absolve its meaningful message! Believe me, it is worthy! Thank you for sharing my dear honorable poet friend! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! We all grow wiser with your sharing wisdom! God Bless You!-  Romeo Della Valle

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HOME COMING... HYPOTHETICS

that is a long time,and as I-  leafsailor

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IN THE GARDEN OF GETHSEMANE

MILTON'S SECOND EPIC "PARADISE REGAINED" IS BASED ON THIS GARDEN WHERE JESUS OVERCAME THE TEMPTATIONS OF THE DEVIL!-  RAJ NANDY

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UNRAVELLING

Morning Sir. Enjoyed this very much. I always look forward to a daily post from you.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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Mosaic

Stark write.Its a state of desperation depicted here,losing al hope.-  Mad Hu

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SWINGING....

a brilliant write...the phlosophic touch gives the poem a whole new feel-  Sandra Martyres
Poetry intertwined with philosophy and science always creates a delightful read. Thanks for sharing .-  Gita Ashok

heavy words that sink into the mind.. well-woven satish.. keep the ink flowing...-  Blissful Anonymity

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Judgement And Curse

Sir, You are a wise person and you must have written something wise in nature.-  Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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A PEEP WITHIN

A reflective write.-  seema chowdhury

An eloquent, profound, reflective verse with deft use of metaphor. The closing stanza is the best.-  Gita Ashok

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LEAR AGAIN...

Always a pleasure to read your fine work.-  LightH2O

giving answers to answers given to questions forgotten...peace-  leafsailor

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ECHOES

Sir, I did enjoy this write. Really liked the last sentence.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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THE PENULTIMATE DILEMMA

So deep it baffles me... great work!-  LightH2O

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RESSURECTION

something to be reborn ,most interesting ,the words that are yours I believe I would know any place-  leafsailor

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