YIN-YANG

So true opposite forces at work and your sensitive spirit describing it so well in your fine crafted write.- LightH2O

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I V/S WE

Revealing last two lines, your words make me dig deep.- LightH2O
It seems you have exposed your wide philosophy in life by the poem. Like the imagery created here. Cheeres from Ceylon-  Punsara

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THE LOST ONES

Your spirit senses these low vibrations which you depict so well.- LightH2O
yes and the oceans were fresh water till they spoiled and made oil.- leafsailor

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INFERNO

Conflict, whether political or tribal, caused by border disputes or territorial claims, always result in tragedy and lost lives. Your poem lays out in gripping pain the mental anguish such conflicts bring forth and leave us the unanswered question "Why can't man talk it over and agree?" because no one ever wins a war.- CynthiaBuhainBaello 

Paints a very grisly picture, it always makes me think deeply.-LightH2O

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A LIVING SOUL

wonderful 10+++- Ashraful Musaddeq

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Flickering

Comment: A death wish of a mountain
flower was to shed the seeds
in the lap of a dandelion.
- marvelous-  Ashraful Musaddeq

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An Anticlimax

As it is a poem about the nature, what is there to hide! very beautiful!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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Swan Song

enjoyed reading your work again!!-  Doris Culverhouse

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MOON STRUCK...

Beautiful write.- Reaching4theTRUTH

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Unbecoming

Morning, Sir. Your usual indepth write. Have a Great Weekend.-  Lady Dragonwyck 

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AN AGONISED PRAYER

I can feel the despair...powerful language.- dzone

A thought provoking write- seema chowdhury

Yes, listening to you sharing your despair. Such a good line: "anguish itself will find the path" , so deeply true.- Mn. Rachel

yes I am listening- leafsailor

Stark, deep and vicious melancholy, Vermaji. An excellent write - I'd been trying to write something on this theme today; but it's just not the right day perhaps.- SnehaSK

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SHAMBHOOK...*

Thank you for sharing my dear friend.- LightH2O

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GOLDEN END

Such an interesting poem, well expressed. There is such a powerful depth of feeling in the experience of birthing described here.
Thanks for sharing- Morning Star

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INWARD ODYSSEY

just loveli-   the temp

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KISSING GODS

Puranas have symbolic characters And we are not expected to blame the writers of epics or puranas. better sense is expected from modern men to observe morality in accordance with the modern ideas. May be our forefathers incestuous for procreation. We are not expected to blame them for that. An enjoyable poem.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur 

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