GENOCIDE

A very dark reality poem. The stark naked truths are shockingly amazing just as your imagination. You are a true poet in all the glory of the meaning of the word. Thank you for publishing on here. You are a delight to read. Diamond.- diamonddagger

you have such deep insight into the realities of life that at times it scares me but never ceases to amaze and astound me.- baj-a

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A BIG IDEA

Who Knows What Those Dirty Untinkable Words Were, Sweet Beautiful Satish ? Perhaps, They May Have Been Somewhat Similar Unto Something That Lucifer Might Have Said Long Long Ago And Far And Far Away, Right Before He And His Crew Started Tumbling From The Stars ? Either Or, Tis Wonderful To Read Your Lovely Beauty Again And Just Another Intense Painting As van Gogh By Your Treasures ˜ My Love, Always- Rachel St.Cross

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OF TIME AND CHAINS

the powerful images you make with your words leave me in awe of your ability as a writer. I especially love the line downstairs moon was sleeping... wow!- baj-a

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CONNIVED

Loved that last line... Well written- ANGEL DUST

This is a wonderful write. Congrats Verma !- WILLIAMSJI

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FAITHLESS HANDS

the entire poem is filled with truth but the last two lines are the truest of all! we do play in sand and yes, it will be hunger that decides the fate of the earth. always inspired by your poetry.- baj-a

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Give Me

Last two lines tug at my heart, I agree with Dorothy, may your memories by healed.- LightH2O

A very touching the heart verse...I send you a prayer to heal the wounds... Dorothy Singing Still- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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UPRIGHT MIRRORS

Very interesting loved it.- SuperSlimJim

Good write, Sathisverma Congrats williamsji maveli- WILLIAMSJI

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JUXTAPOSED

magnificently sad. "by your absence I will live in the bones of tangled bodies" this is so well written that I loved reading it. I told you, I love your work. I could read it all day if I didn't have so much to do. diamond- diamonddagger

profoundly sad and strong... give me a piece of your body... wow! amazing work here!- baj-a

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CONDEMNED

"Between brothers, the greed calls for incendiary attacks, for total annihilation" ..."No night was safe from the condemned suicide. " very painful, only purest light of love can extinguish these memories, but it can't changed what happened... a loving hand in support for you.-LightH2O

Awesome! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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CITY OF STONES

Much pain and turmoil displayed- LightH2O

Vivid raw imagery.- just Arun

I cried...it hurt. I felt the thorns and can almost see my own tendons hanging off of them. I will never forget your words here...or maybe i will try to forget...they were that good.- Jenessis

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ANOTHER STROKE

the horror of the scene is so vivid in the words you write. I am so pained by the words I cannot even find words to describe how deeply it has affected me.-baj-a

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FAILURE

Profound. Reading this, I was reminded of the defaced and plundered
6th Century Buddhas of Bamiyan (Afghanistan) - handiwork of intolerant elements...
Great metaphors, great poem this Mr. Verma.- Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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FAIRY RINGS

A powerful poem containing much food for thought Satish.- Fay Slimm

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HE

Wow! very power packed poem. I felt as though I were reading about a prophet. Well written as usual.- diamonddagger

I have to agree with everything diamonddager said. this is another wow! poem.- baj-a

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PUSSYFOOT

Your poems often go over my head. They are to me, like a beautiful puzzle
that I'm not sure I want to solve.- LindaM 

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