Sunday, July 14, 2013

Saturday, July 13, 2013

Thursday, July 11, 2013

Wednesday, July 10, 2013

JUXTAPOSED

To God all life is precious...surely He abhors bloody atrocities more than you or i can even fathom...these are man's choices. Those who truly follow Jesus would never shed blood, for God asks us to forgive and turn the other cheek. Not all men however choose God or His ways..

Your poem seems to depict those men who reject God.
I think your words make a good argument for embracing the Lord and His ways.
Excellent use of language and imagery...very effective and moving poetry.-Wide Awake

Tuesday, July 9, 2013

BLAST

Road is deserted. A white pigeon lies dead

inhuan act

A tragic tale
Our face turns pale
Many more deaths
With senseless blasts.-Hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

DISASTER AND AFTER

The fittest survive, that we know. Existential fight goes on. May be that man is cruel, but he has to exploit for his well being. And to dream too much about a distant future, el dorado, may not be practical. Then the ravages which we are destined to suffer.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala

FACE TO FACE

From the economic point of view all disasters are the positive protective measure of Nature.To a thinking man a turning point.Nice poem. -P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala

Wednesday, July 3, 2013

TWILIGHT

You have this unique way of saying things that takes the readers on this ride of scenes that is recalling wonderful I love your last stanzas that was a great ending thanks for sharing.-Winter Goddess

OBLIVION

Very interesting and unique comparatives used between nature and man. You have a vivid imagination.- Kim van Breda

Tuesday, July 2, 2013

ON BURNING COALS

Sand in our eyes, we walked bare-foot on burning coals. Oh! the tough journey of life you stretched wonderfully!nimal p. dunuhinga


*On 100th Birthday of Alan Turing

good write, good tribute, thanks.
I invite you to read my poems and comment.-Gajanan Mishra

Monday, July 1, 2013

BURNT TASTE

Last stanza is so wise. Take care and see you in a week.- LightH2O

Saturday, June 29, 2013

FUTURITY

These are trying times indeed, east and west, though I'm tempted to say waste..- noah count