Stripping to the Bones

I could listen to chaotic cries and dwelling in a hollowness that makes the particles’ shrivel and collapse, a feeling to share and a feeling to lose the fear of the seeds within… that will set one free, when the voices become music.-Dolphine29 

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Secret Conflicts

Great write awesome.-Sagar D Rebel

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On The Annıversary Of Gustav Klimt

Art nouveau genius klimt. The kiss still my favorite. Shimmering gold.-

Well written take care..........-Sagar D Rebel

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EXPLICITLY

Great write - Thanks for sharing!-Pandita Sanchez

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I Am Thinking

And Again Great Write! Liked!-puds1957

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CATASTROPHE

Well Written Good theory.-SuperSlimJim

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Ancestral Present

This is a very well written piece of poetry!-preciouspoetess

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Constraints

Simply brilliant in their simplicity and clarity.-sheila

Great Write Liked!-puds1957

Deep.-UrbanJ

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The Final Call

A Very Good Write Liked!-puds1957

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A LIVING SOUL

very, very nice piece-mizclaws 

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After The Carnage

Wow. Such a beautifully written poem. At once so heartbreakingly sad but then you've given that faint glimmer of hope at the closing. Beautifully done!-Colleen Courtney

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Altercation

a very fine emotive write ...stephen keyes

Very touching.-Sagar D Rebel

the pain of holding family grudges. heartfelt poem.- treble-t

Such a moving poem. Emotion is there, tinged with sadness. I prefer your poetry in this layout, much more flow to the verses. -Tattoo Queen

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DECAYED CENTURY

Wow Im impressed by your poem.-Brian Jani

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From the Cherry Blossoms

The décalage is expressed with firmness, with determination. Did not understand the meaning of the word studing. If the Sun, which is at the epicentre, refuses to deliver, then hopelessness becomes the only fate. In my opinion, the poem is more on acceptance rather than on any expectation of a shifting paradigm. The challenge with the poet is that he never responds, never. So learners like me have to focus only on his poems, on nothing else. But I guess that should be enough. Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Sleepwalking

Beautiful insightful poetry.I thought the last four lines were perfectly placed. - sheila

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