Sunday, May 31, 2015
Goodbye
‘So tired, just want to go’, that feeling of futility, so wonderfully expressed.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )
Claustrophobia
This takes more than one read to fully appreciate. Good work!-firebird918
Saturday, May 30, 2015
Crib Of Sun
Beautiful thoughts…very well expressed here!-Shamala Chandran ( @Shamala_Chandran )
Flames
The poem leaves back a deep feeling, hard to erase and definitely craving to read for more of this class:)-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )
Friday, May 29, 2015
THE CLOSED WINDOW
It seems that one needs to be more discreet with his/her visitors! :) Hello Satish- FJ Thomas
Enigmatic
well said...- Ramin Chaman
I don't know if faith is such a permanent state anymore. In the Bible faith grows, it wains, it is denied, it is embraced, it is human to have faith, so I can only imagine what the secular endure. Good write. Thought provoking. - honest harriet
I don't know if faith is such a permanent state anymore. In the Bible faith grows, it wains, it is denied, it is embraced, it is human to have faith, so I can only imagine what the secular endure. Good write. Thought provoking. - honest harriet
Wednesday, May 27, 2015
Foeticide
The harsh reality of the times we live in, the ever destructive nature of man takes over.. -Shamala Chandran ( @Shamala_Chandran )
Cup Of Sorrow
Sorrow and pain caused by violence, death and disdain, written very well!-Sahana ( @Sahana_Vasudevan )
Like A Firebird
Anger and grief depicted in short and sweet yet in a very meaningful wayhttp://highonpoems.com/.-Sahana ( @Sahana_Vasudevan )
Incarnation
Revival is the key! Excellent usage of metaphors truly Inspiring!-Sahana ( @Sahana_Vasudevan )
Now You Know
Profound lessons learnt and realized , penned down from the very depths of learning! Great work.-Sahana ( @Sahana_Vasudevan )
First Words
Lots of subtle references, knots, descent. Deep dark valleys on both sides, with ground sinking under your feet. Scary-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )
Auburn Dawn
What would it be like to watch this dawn from space, floating to nowhere from somewhere.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq )
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