Friday, July 31, 2015

Exasperation

It is very hot here now too,
but some of us are talking to God,
which is quite a good idea!
Thanks for sharing!-Clarence Prince

Thanks for sharing your wealth though very little but very precious.-Abdulrazak Aralimatti

*impact

Turns me on
I will write a poem
It a wonder what that is?
Thanks for sharing, Satish Verma!-Clarence Prince

Muse And Sorrow

Such a beautiful poem that touches the heart of the reader. Many blessings......Pat

Blazing Trail

A very sad poem. But well written it draws you in and you feel the pain.-Doreen James ( @Doreen_James )

Sharks

Existence is devouring existence itself, cannibalism of souls.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq ) 

Wednesday, July 29, 2015

Sunday, July 26, 2015

Sculpturing

great imagery. - J. Robyn

Another amazing piece of writing my friend - surely your fine talent lies in the use of unique metaphor.- Fay Slimm

Saturday, July 25, 2015

No Hatred

Very nicely envisined and aptly presented. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Friday, July 24, 2015

Dream Landing

Your words are so beautiful and your poems feel so vast. I love the starting words "Candle by candle, you burn your dreams." It's just so beautifully said.- The Nameless

Thursday, July 23, 2015

Animation

Lovely ethereal imagery... :)-'stiltskin .

Such a potent sadness in this linguistic treat - - an unforgettable read.- Fay Slimm

Wednesday, July 22, 2015

The Wait

Wonderful poem. It's nice.-Claire Morris

Charred Mistakes

Morning Star

Love this. This is very similar to one of my poems. The surreal fiber is so real to me. It is what I call poetical reality. The platonic weave:
"Words would disappear,
only meaning will be left."
gives it a vivid poetic sensibility. The one that is out of reach in 'sensible reality.'

"The interval ceases to be" is profound reveals the arbitrary aspect of space. Though I am confused in the use of 'wasness'
Once more it is a platonic theme that death is kind of relief for the "lost childe whose burden was his taste." This works either way, whether if the taste itself is unbearable, or if regardless of being unbearable or pleasant, still, in itself, is a burden.

And perhaps the death is the morning star, a wake up in " The City of Utopia"-Gadfly

Verities

... expel of powerful blows of might living in the mind of the powerless pen, you have just extracted the venom of a mighty mind of the universe.God bless your a mindful poet Sir of this 21st century.- antonio liao