Your poems are intriguing and enigmatic. Do yo write them in your tongue and them translate them, or do you write them in English? They are quite enigmatic and give you thought.-rrodriguez
You are a Johann Sebastian Bach of poetry. Complicated, forcing one to slow down and listen to the words a couple times in concentration to hear the music hidden inside. To hear through "the complication" to the simple melody within. Thank you for slowing us down...-B.Joel
Death from war certainly leaves scars on us forever, especially when experienced first hand. Afterwards it seems so meaningless. Love the second verse. Dolly'sPoems
"The space between the memories will shrink and we will destroy the ugly calendar" ...fantastic ending, a parting shot at time, how we waste time.-Frank F Highly
Wow Wow Wow...excellent write, by far my favourite read of the day. I loved the use of words and their meaning. Deep and thought provoking. well done.- Frank F Highly
A very interestingly described write.-Jazmine Reid
We are so many layers too deep for our own understanding, so we only see a thin layer, we forever search, this in itself can be overwhelming, and has driven some to madness. So we are better off enjoying this layer of life, although sometimes fraught with pain. Enjoyed reading your lovely poem.- Monica
An example of your abiding talent here my friend - one of your gifts of excellent imagery lights up the verse - a poet's poem which I wish to read again and again - thank you for sharing it Satish my friend.- Fay Slimm
An emotional piece. I particularly liked the first stanza where the wind writes and the sun wipes away.Might I just suggest that nowhere is usually written as one word. -Milly Hayward
nice...nature is not so harmoniums in the hands of modern men now as your verse is.... really enjoyable....a spontaneous flow of deep thinking of the polluted earth... a good sharing.-B.m. Biswas