Thursday, September 22, 2016

Meanness

this is powerful.-authorAAA

I can't imagine where you get your ideas, but they're something to admire for sure.-abstractempo

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Drought

Impactful; heavy on the heart, light in the mind.-abstractempo

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Tracking

Your poems are intriguing and enigmatic. Do yo write them in your tongue and them translate them, or do you write them in English? They are quite enigmatic and give you thought.-rrodriguez

Rambling Roses

Wow!!AMAZING WORK HERE...I AM AT A LOSS FOR WORDS OTHER THAN WoW!!-Pharaoh33

Chessboard

You are a Johann Sebastian Bach of poetry. Complicated, forcing one to slow down and listen to the words a couple times in concentration to hear the music hidden inside. To hear through "the complication" to the simple melody within. Thank you for slowing us down...-B.Joel

Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Aubrurn Dawn

When you witness death at close quarters it has a profound affect on the rest of your life, as it is in your case, intuitive sad write.-Dolly'sPoems

What a saga, great piece. The simplicity And flow sparkle.-Senatorucheo

Circle Of Glory

great write, liked.-LAD1066

Love 'the shadow was a terrorist on the terrace' as always a deep and beautifully crafted write.- Helenmatherrogers

A Handful Of Victories

A sorrowful yet compelling read.-Briz

Death from war certainly leaves scars on us forever, especially when experienced first hand. Afterwards it seems so meaningless. Love the second verse. Dolly'sPoems

Dying Beautifully

"The space between the memories will shrink and we will destroy the ugly calendar"
...fantastic ending, a parting shot at time, how we waste time.-Frank F Highly

Wow Wow Wow...excellent write, by far my favourite read of the day. I loved the use of words and their meaning. Deep and thought provoking. well done.- Frank F Highly
A very interestingly described write.-Jazmine Reid

Easy To Forget

We are so many layers too deep for our own understanding, so we only see a thin layer, we forever search, this in itself can be overwhelming, and has driven some to madness. So we are better off enjoying this layer of life, although sometimes fraught with pain. Enjoyed reading your lovely poem.- Monica

Tears Were Never Sweet

I concur with the previous comment tears were never sweet, great line, great write buddy!- grant

Tears are never sweet, sadness flows. There can be tears of joy. Beautiful.- Bjs

Lake Scenes

I like it, a lovely scene constructed in verse!- grant

Brilliant poem, the dragonfly, Lake Huron in flames...wow.-Kw6fay

Unfog The Sky

An example of your abiding talent here my friend - one of your gifts of excellent imagery lights up the verse - a poet's poem which I wish to read again and again - thank you for sharing it Satish my friend.- Fay Slimm

Friday, September 16, 2016

Ressurection

An emotional piece. I particularly liked the first stanza where the wind writes and the sun wipes away.Might I just suggest that nowhere is usually written as one word. -Milly Hayward

Dedication

nice...nature is not so harmoniums in the hands of modern men now as your verse is....
really enjoyable....a spontaneous flow of deep thinking of the polluted earth...
a good sharing.-B.m. Biswas