Saturday, November 26, 2016

Mood Swings

Wow, so much visually swirling about. Your first stanza hooked me and it just blew me away. Amazing--Brenda

Afterimages

Wow oh wow-this is just beautiful! Your visuals are a story within a story-loved it!-Brenda

Thursday, November 24, 2016

Wings Attached

Your words are so beautiful and yet mystifying. They speak poetically of art that steals the meaning from my lips. Well done. -Mr Darcy

Wednesday, November 23, 2016

Dirty homes

It is possible to interpret this poem and most of your poems in general as pessimistic. However, I understand this and many of your other poems as a yearning, a longing, a screech to come out of this insane situation where god dies daily, but closed-eyed people insist on reading something positive where god lives as a decorative possession in affluent homes. They would instantly discard texts that do not speak of beautiful things with beautiful words. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Tuesday, November 22, 2016

The Blue Lake Burns

There is only Love... Ever the only answer-K

Ceremonial

I will unmourn my death Perfect.-Mike Adam

Scouring

for me, this is astute social commentary... but i do hope to see a world that doesn't inflict violence on every family... or a world where every family doesn't inflict violence within and thereby assault the world... ~ violence of any kind is just too damaging and hard to accept in any form...-serah . 

Massive Explosion

vivid... i can actually visualize emotional demolition... -. serah . 

A Kiss Melts

Beautiful imagery.-MrJMSm

Nice write.-Trucker

Tree Of Light Dances

I'm not sure I understand all of this but I enjoyed reading your poem. Really good descriptive write..liked..-Jazmine Reid

Beautiful write, loved this.Madeira

Innocent Was The Betrayal

Gather The Sun

Love 'we disintegrate in semi colons' - fab write .-Helenmatherrogers

A great write .-HITENDRA

Passion Is A Hurricane

Lips Will Measure

To Laugh Or To Weep

Nice write
A dark poem need to read a few times to get into it but liked it.- Trucker