Flares

This evoked strong imagery and said so much with so little, very beautiful.-Kestrova

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Strangely

Great write.-Tony36

Wonderful write my friend. People are very strange indeed! we need to check our self's.-willyweed

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The Final Retreat

When my time comes, I will lose everything............ Plain truth about life. Congrats for being the member's -Jayatissa K. Liyanage

We owe nothing! And you seem able to put across nicely. -Christina Simmons

Transcendent
The tone of loss here is heart aching. The imagery is both concrete and physical while also being diaphanous and ethereal. There is science present, religion and strong emotive power. Something like remorse moves through the verses without being remorseful. The emotions and intellect both are owned, but elusive. This is a very moving poem. A very human poem. Transcendent in its execution. Humbling. -Lantz Pierre

Gradually I will stop
speaking about myself. When
my time comes, I will lose everything
and set you free.

The blind eagle will find its abode.
- - - - - - - - - - -A deeply philosophical poem
Poetry speaks our life.Poetry is the retreat of a poet. But gradually we all prepare for our final retreat.
.Congratulations for Poem of the day. -Bharati Nayak

Fire! !
This was not the game. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

Excellent Poem
Indeed it is a final retreat. Congrats for the honour of POTD.-Mohammed Asim Nehal

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Ghost Town

Excellent word play.-Jessica

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Carnality

This writing spoke to me in such a powerful way. I used to be afraid of much of what you wrote about and even now I come with apprehension somewhat because so much was too complicated for me to grasp and yet I was oftentimes finding direction in your words and so I would open your pages and do the best I could with understanding.-Debera

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From The Cherry Blossoms

LINKS THE MOVEMENT OF GRIEF
Like the saunder waves of grey-burkej1h

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Inward Journey

The mentor wants blood, truth
The mentor wants blood, truth was in body,
small seeds of life.
The mentor wants food, truth was in blood --- small seeds of the dandoline!!!-burkej1h

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Flame

Yes, I like the profound sense in this poem. Searching for the truth needs the energy/heat of the Spirit within. We must not lose that!- MrJMSm

A very good write.-Trucker

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Transitional Edge

great write as always.- mesayers

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Muse And Sorrow

IT'S AN AGE OF ELECTRONIC TORTURE TO THE INNOCENT. PLEASE, TAKE CARE OF THEM. I ENJOY YOUR POEMS SO MUCH.- Sidhan

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For A Forgotton Story

I read you and enjoy but often fear commenting thank you for sharing- Sid "de" knees

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Sanity

Hi. Happy Thanx/Mourning Day in the USA. Panoplay of imagery and understated aspiration/action weaves a mysterious and breezy poetic tapestry; thanx. Namaste.-reality1

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Moving Shadows

Tender writings my Friend-SuperSlimJim 

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Insight

A deep excellent poem..-Floreann Cawley

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CRUEL BONHOMIE

Interesting, impressive, strange perspective beyond the cruelty and BONHOMIE.Congrat-Ovidiu Bocsa

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